So is pete going to show up? or a final fanise character ? Is ven going RELLY ** Roxas ? what is Terra doing with Xirck ? And what is Aqau doing with Namine ? Have a meeting with king mickey or A heartless invason on the whole school.

I like how they can see them in the reflections.

have a fight between riku and xemnes. or have wakka and tidous go to school.

Well this chapter ROCKED and I believe that even if Selphie knew the truth she'd still be a **.

Go Roxas for finally getting Two-Across, and as long as the story is good, it doesn't matter much how long the chapters are.

Poor Roxas...

I like Riku's Noboby, he's nice!

Dude! You nailed this thrilling opening :D
Just finished the first chapter, but will come back for more

A good chapter. Like I've said numerous times, I've never played Kingdom Hearts and am especially fuzzy on the plot details so I'm still bumbling on in your story but I enjoy it all the same. It's really hard for me to keep track of who all these characters are. Doesn't help that I don't know their faces either.

You like Chemistry too? They have great harmony.

Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.

hey!
Not love~?
hmm ok...
It is nice the way you wrote it ^^
One hint!
Don't need to put the character to foward! people aren't that foward... Do like people! do some hm, akward silences and stuff like that.
It will look like more like a normal conversation ^^

I heart it!
Keep like this ;3

Hmm... I seriously wonder how old Ven REALLY is...

Honney!
I love it!
Is so lovely!
To say the truth i have ever read a fanfiction Roxas X Sora...
And it is just cute!
Go for it! You can do it!

Waiting for the next chappy ;3

Dfly~

I loved it I hope you updata soon

Who IS Riku's nobody? What WAS Roxas's friggin' reply? I dunno but find out in the next episode of Two Across! Update XD... me likey