Excellent story.

Wow. Creepy stuff.

Your descriptions of bloodbending were the kind of detailed descriptions that make me very aware of my body working... and it's kind of scary. But they were good, and your words were all varied.

The way you showed that Hama/Hana was turning even worse than the firebenders she so detests was very good - it showed how crazy she is.

One mistake: As far as I can see, '... truthfully spit this out too' should be '... truthfully spit this out to'.

Nice one. Oh, and I'm guessing you're British from the time you loaded this up... If you are, go you, because us lot need more love. (Or you watched it on the netz.)

Anyway, this was really good. I loved it =]

I haven't seen 'The Puppetmaster' yet (it hasn't aired in the US yet), but this story has me really psyced for it. Very dark and interesting story.

Yo, Youko, when you get this give me a call, okay? Haven't heard from you in a while, and am bit worried.

O_O

Creepy. Just like the episode.

I personally was intrigued with Hama (Hana?), and am glad to see some eerie fanfic for her already. Very well done.