“So that’s why how you respond to my kisses? Why, you tasted my tongue as if was a candy…”

Ar, he said that! He's so hot. Please update soon ^^

You know, I'd really like to see your fanfics in Filipino. Since you can't express yourself well enough in English, a Filipino fic would be more of your style. Dou? I would make a very unique read.

And I see that you do have a good friend there to help you with errors. And I guess I shouldn't complain of the innuendos, as this is rated T. The characters shouldn't be too angry, you know? I think they should be more mature. I hope they find more humor in their situations.

I'm reading on behalf of a friend's concern. Well, abundance of this sort of romance and Gundam Seed isn't exactly something I run after. I strongly recommend that you have a friend review your story beforehand so it can lessen unneeded grammatical errors and perhaps broaden your perspective in terms of storyline.

I can tell that you have much to learn and that you have potential. You're doing way better than me when I was at that stage.

For my real review regarding the story.

By the second chapter I had to grip the table hard at my reaction to the blatantly shameless and unnerving seductive exchange. It's too frank and it's like the characters are having their character raped. I really, really didn't like that part.

Anyway, do your best, gambatte and all that jazz.

LOLL very interesting chapter!! lol anyways love the story plz update soon!:)

it's me animelover... and i wish that you would have great ideas in your mind for thus fic and your other fics... i like your fics... and hope you would never get tired of updating or making new stories...

i love your story!!
can i ask you something personal? what country are you from?

WAH! I dunno what is this all about... i haven't read anything too... but did anyone say (T.T should i say write?) dictio queen? Hi!! dictio... Are you an updated dictionary? mwahhahahahahh!!

typos shiloah? you wound me deeply. oh well, i have to admit, i was gonna be late for my class that time when i was editing cags's ff, so i guess a few considerations are called forth. my gosh! i almost got a nosebleed from this chapter. don't tell me it didn't affect you too! if it didn't, well, you must be very... um... you know what i'm gonna say. after all, you're the dictio queen! ^^

so, anyway, nice story cags! go horse! gallop!

go cags1 level up! be a magician and my beautiful Jime will be the one to leech you! yeah! go acrobats! go flyffers!



~franz_kawaii

nice chapter.
luv the ending.

good luck with your entrance exam... i was having this idea that when cagalli and athrun finally develop and admit their feelings for one another, her mother become worried about cagalli and will know her father's plan then called her cousins to rescue cagalli...then there would be the scenarios wherein athrun and cagalli defend their love or kept it a secret due to the reason that cagalli was entrusted to athrun by her father... nice story... please update soon...

Athrun is like a maniac,hahaha,!I hope you can update soon so that you can already finish this fic coz it's really nice[and so that you can start another fic,hehehe!

Tsk. They're just so mean to each otehr =P

man athrun is kind of a kerk here...asucaga moments are needed!HAHA

"..her she feLt an overwheLming mix of anger," her she? -_^

"It’s as if she’s the one who seduced him." *sighs* weLL, Cags.. you did.. not on purpose though.. XD

"She said before turning he back to him and sLipping into her t-shirt." he? her?

"he was in top of her," in? on?

nyWeiZ, I was reading "As GuiLty As Innocent" by Athyra when your update came up.. hmm.. it's aLready tweLve o'six.. gotta hand it to you.. you made me smiLe.. ^^ I was waiting for someone to update.. and here you are.. thanks!

hmm.. a few typos demo.. it's getting better.. I gueSs.. ^.^v jaa ne in your next update! ;3

oh! lookey! lookey! i have many fans! *waves* hi fans!

grabe... as in... in as!

no! my assist died... again. curse u steel knights!


great work cagz! you deserve a tap on the back and you have to give me a bag of cookies coz i am hungry...!


lalalalalala...!

shiloah! how dare you insult me? me good? youre practically lying. have you seen my very short story?

it started like: "once upon a time... the end."

lol

have i mentioned i'm crazy at best and phychotic at least?

^_^

big hugs to Cagali-chan! *HUG*

~fwanz_kawaii