cool story

Hello Kelthoran
You did well for "In Rememberance" and the it flowed quite nicely. The only regret I have is that the flash back with the priest and Kasumi's "Demon" where not explained more.

Sincerely
Tinleaf

::sniffles, then bawls:: So exquisitely sad. Thank you for a sadly lovely story.

A sad one... Thankfully, it was short, or I would have had to dry unshed tears...

Just a question: What happened to Nabiki? She fled, so she must be alive somewhere...

I'm not entirely sure what to say. It was interesting and cheesy and the same time. Ranma simply killing everyone with one super move seems kind of weak. While I have little doubt he was strong enough to do so by the end of the manga, actually doing so is massively OOC. He wasn't on bad terms with most of the Nerima crew by the end anymore, it's unlikely everyone would suddenly decide to kill him. They certainly wouldn't try to hurt Kasumi either. Not even Tarou is that much of an **.

I think the reason many Ranma fanfics are written is the desire for CLOSURE - the closure Takahashi-sensei never gave. I can't say it was happy, but it was well-written; and left space for a future beyond the closure. "Happily ever after" is a story frozen in time. You ended with "Afterwards ..."

Somthing now that has me teary-eye, bravo my freind.

Oh in the 3rd to last paragraph you have a grammer problem.

it should be "I wish I was there had been more time." not "I wish I that there had been more time."

good story by the way

I like it very much. One hardly ever sees Herb in any of the stories on this site and if he is he is usually a jerk.

Not a bad one-shot. Not bad at all.

My only complaint is a personal one, and that merely of opinion. Like many others, you leave the reader with the image of Nodoka being seemingly blameless in the chaos that was Ranma's life in Nerima, when nothing could have been further from the truth. If anything, she was as guilty of making Ranma's life a living hell as anyone, if not more so, as she was one of the very few who had actually been in a position to resolve many of the problems...but chose instead to make Ranma's lot even worse in order to pursue her own goals at his expense.

So, I'm of the opinion that you should have killed her off with the rest.

Very Unique pairings here. I can see how you added herb here but IMHO someone else would have been better. Ubt still a great story!

dennisud

Nicely done, though Ranma being with Herb seems a bit out there. but very nicely don just the same!

Aside from killing everyone in one super-flashy move, it seemed like it could work.

Wow . . . just wow.

I'm going to have to assume this was a parody of some sort, cleverly disguised, because it's been awhile since I've seen so much blatant bashing, OOC and unlikely character actions in such a short space of time. Just wow, all other words fail me, and I'm usually pretty good for turning a blind eye to that kinda thing, the 'golden rule' and all that, but it just needed to be said.