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| Sue1313 2008-08-07 ch 2,  | abuseThis is just the best story. I hope you go back and finish it. |
| butterfly-92 2007-11-24 ch 2, | abusevery good.. I like that it also show how JJ feels.. I missed that on the show and in some other fics.. :) |
| SLITH 2007-11-19 ch 2, | abuseWow - I haven't seen the full episode to the one of JJ and Reid but its nice to read it in this full perspective. I got to see the episodes after it though. Awesome story thus far with the P.O.V's as its very helpful and I can't wait to read more. I quite liked how Gideon left the moment to Reid and JJ when she was asleep, Reid's own mind of what he's dreamt of. I've heard many blame JJ for what happened but what what you've written it sounds pretty accurate to the music videos I've seen of the situation. JJ is my favorite character. Awesome job and can't wait for more! SLITH |
| tearbos 2007-11-15 ch 2, | abuseHotch seems a little harsh in this chapter. I like how you used the different POVs. Some are a little better than others, but overall its good. |
| SpencerReid 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseIt's SPENCER REID! not that hard! but the story is good so yeah. XD |
| lagentillefan 2007-11-13 ch 2, | abuseThe beginnign of your story is great!And now,the next chapter,hm? (I know, I'm boring...Sorry T_T ) |
| flyersgirl12 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abusefantastic start. i am really enjoying how you are switching between povs. i can't wait to read what happens. please up date soon |
| Linda66 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is great so far,i really wish they would have got more into JJ's side of the story in the Tobias Henkel incident,how she was dealing with it,i mean it must have been terrifying to be attacked by 3 wild Dogs that just ate a woman to pieces,i'd like to see JJ get used a little more often...She must have felt incredibly guilty after what happened even though it wasn't her fault,it would have been a really good storyline to get into! |
| Sarge1 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abuseLovin' it so far! Can't wait for more! |
| withoutatacegirl 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abuseI like the story it a nice change.All the ones out there have to do with Reid and the aftermath of the events.Nobody dose one on how JJ felt.Please update soon |
| starryeyes10 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abusegreat story. |
| CrImInAlMiNdScSiNyFaN87 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abuseI like it so far, I am a huge JJ/Reid fan. But I noticed so many grammatical errors I lost count. I don't know if you used a spellcheck program before posting it but if you didn't you may want to or ask somebody to proofread it for you to fix all the mistakes. But other than that I thought it was great. |
| tearbos 2007-10-25 ch 1, | abuseNice start. I really like the idea of Reid helping JJ. I look forward to more. I did notice quite a few grammar errors. You might want to get someone to proofread for you. |