Reviews for Petals, and the Sword

Reviews For: Petals, and the Sword

acchooo 2008-08-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow! You’re an awesome writer you know. I loved every bit of it but Akira’s POV is my favorite. And this line made me shiver: I understand your command, ojou-sama. Oh, I understand. And... I’ll obey! Damn secchan! I want my very own shy samurai! And I sort of ship Nodoka/Setsuna for the very shallow reason that their live action actresses are extremely cute!
金秋佐津渡 2008-05-30 ch 1, anon.	abuse私は刹那佐倉桜崎が大友愛好きだ I love teh fic!
MicchiMicchi 2008-04-04 ch 1,	abuseAmazing, just amazing. I'm at a loss of words.
Nonori 2007-11-03 ch 1,	abuseThis was really cute and sweet. Nice to see you can write something that isn't purely angst, lol. I wasn't sure who's POV was last, but that's probably because I don't read Negima and only watched a few episodes of the anime. I like the fanfiction more, ha. So yeah, I really liked this, but I'll eagerly await for more of your fanfics.
C. 2007-11-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseSugoi! I liked all the point of views. Nodoka's was very funny. Akira's was very good as well I like the comparisons. I hope there is more and please update your other fic as well when you get the chance.
Spritznar 2007-10-30 ch 1,	abuseLOL indeed the world does revolve around setsuna. or it should anyway ^.^ i love these little short fics/drabbles/whatevers. they make good food for thought (and imagination). oh, and the one with nodoka was hilarious XD
A 2007-10-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow, just wow. I liked it. Is more coming?
Rain54 2007-10-27 ch 1,	abuseI like your approach to this story, and how you unfold the story in each person's POV certainly breathes something different to it. If I had to pick, Evangeline's POV is probably the one that I like the most, just because the meaning behind her words reveals the bittersweet reality of their nature of relationship. Nodoka's part was amusing, so she's really curious eh? I'm not sure who's POV it was on the last one. Then again I haven't followed Negima manga much ever since there was nothing new about KonoSetsu so I might miss this character. Great job, really enjoyed it! Now I'm going to read 'Drink Me' :p
Kafka'sdragon 2007-10-27 ch 1,	abuseOnce again, I am impressed with your writing. Phrases like "... and just listens to the cool, quiet blue of the night sky" have a poetic quality that immediately conjure the image. I also think you do a great job of capturing the character's emotions and personalities in their separate monologues. And no, I don't think you need to do anything further to identify the speakers. Despite how good the writing, I am left wondering where the story is in all of this. I am guessing that this is more of an introduction to the characters and that the actual story will begin in the next chapter. Here's to chapter two.
RavenRoth1000 2007-10-26 ch 1,	abuseYeshh! Ah...so wise of you, the young ones do still read it(points at self)! XD I like it! Please hurry and continue Drink Me! Onegaishimasu!
Whitewash 2007-10-26 ch 1,	abuseIt's so... so... so /honest/. (And of course, that's a good thing.) Akira's POV was the best, I think; the comparison worked well, and especially because they don't really know each other compared to everyone else who talked about her. Poor Nodoka, though, daring herself to peek into Setsuna's innermost thoughts like that. XD Ack. I can't review today. But yeah. 'S good.
Tikigod784 2007-10-26 ch 1,	abuseexcellent! You could totally play around with this concept in several different one-shots and STILL keep it interesting like this. Good work.

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