I loved this! It was sad, but very touching. Excellent job :)

Very nicely done!! Your ability to put so much feeling in so few lines. Please keep writing POTC. I have put you on my Author Alert list, and look forward to reading more from you.:)

Wonderful story. Poor James.
"He would just have to avoid her eyes, because even prepared, he wasn't sure he could stand her look of contempt just yet..."
Aww, that was so sad. Actually, the whole story was sad.
Well done!