You're a very good writer, and unlike most, you are able to catch the suave and collected persona that is Sanji. Wonderful. Splendid. Brilliant. ;)

I like the story and the setting. however i think them sitting there and making out while still on enel's maxim is a little ridiculous considering he would have come out and killed them both.

AWESOME story!

That would be funny and cool as heck to see a bit of EnelxNami at the end ^^. You should do a EnelxNami fic some time in the future, I barely see anything but LuffyxNami and FrankyxRobin. It's quite sad really T_T

"...her chest heaving as she finally gained the ability to breathe once mor5 e."

totally utterly completely awesome!

While I was reading this I kept thinking, "Get off the ship you morons!" Aside from that, your descriptions are well-written. I especially liked the last line of the story. Your Nami-Sanji interaction was interesting though I think you had Nami berating herself a little too much. Overall, I quite liked this story. Keep up the good work!

W00T!

“Nami-san, if you continue crying over me, I’ll toss you over the railing myself.”

THis point on, it's simply adorable. I enjoy the few cooking metaphors you put after this. And, obviously, I like this line, because I posted it here :D (My author analysis? He wanted her to be safe, so he would have thrown her overboard to get her that way... Providing, of course, that there was a pillow at the bottom ^^)

-chants- Sanji/Nami fic early in the mor-ning! Sanji/Nami fic early in the morn-ing...

AWESOME! KEEP 'EM COMING!

~VM