Your writing is brilliantly. It's descriptive yet not overbearing, it's insightful but not too deep - it's perfect. So, this takes place in the summer after the sixth book or..? I thought Narcissa was very much in character, but I'm not too sure about Lucius. Would he really say thank you to a house elf? Besides that it was a great chapter!

Great Story, Can't Wait for the Sequel

I loved this chapter!
Finally they showed a little bit of emotion. I love how you write them, though they changed in this chapter you still managed to write them in character. I also loved the sequence when Draco looked at his mother and she reminded him of Bellatrix, because they were sisters and finally someone wrote of their likeness. I also loved the last sentence which was like in the deathly hollows but a little bit changed. I enjoyed this story very much and I hope you will write more about the Malfoys cause you write them brilliantly!

Fabulous!
This ( Christmas Day) is the first time I've had time to finish reading this and it is wonderful!
Yours,
M
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I love this chapter. You should be very proud of this story. But I´m sad that there´s only one chapter left. So what is that master plan of that Lucius is planning, about time he figured out that he loved Narcissa. Can´t wait to read the next chapter.
Please update very soon!!

Loved this chapter! So sad, but what was the picture of. Please write more and say what the picture was of.
Please update soon!!

There doesn't seem to be a plot if you end it here.

absolutely beautiful.

Another great chapter.

great story, i really like the little flashbacks

I really like this story. You have a gift with description.

Omg!! I love your story. What is Narcissa going to do?
Can´t wait to read more!!
Please update soon!!

keep going

I hope Luc goes get help for his family

good chapter!

I admire the verbose, but you do not have to justify it - I never do and I am legend for it and my detail. My pedantic style of writing is of much annoyance to some.
I enjoyed reading this, interesting take on the relationship.
I look forward to reading more.
Yours,
M
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