This story is really deep and that makes this wonderful. I really love the way you wrote in Pein view and how you his reaction/thoughts to things the others did. To sum it up I loved this, I can't help but to get really into all of your stories.

way late.. but this story was lovely
wanted you to know : )

Aww, this is so cute. I love your way of writing, and how you managed to add a little SasoDei in there.

Aww cute and angsty! Very nice!!

Wow...So deep. Anyways, HANDS OFF, KONAN! HE'S MINE! MINE! Lol. Jk. I LOVE THIS PAIRING! And I love Pein-nii-san! Yes, I think he's my brother. :D WELL DONE! Gimme some of your wisdom, will ya?

That was really good, well done.

You're extremely witty. I was reading this and had to stop 3 different times to tell my sister about the little things you had in here. It's very in character. The ending is a bit depressing but it's Pein and what can you expect from a character who thinks he's a god. Very good job and I envy your gift of infinite wittiness.


~Nadeshiko Nara

'Zettie' you mean Zetsu?

... I'M REVIEWING DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT IT!

I liked this a lot, actually. Kidomaru gives six thumbs up!

I actually can feel what Pain is thinking right now O_O..
You're a amazing writer!