Awasome!

I love your story omg! Its so good, write more stories please, i love your writing! thanks for such a great story

I had no trouble understanding what happened with chapter 17 and the meaning of the sixth LHW. But, this was a much better ending, I think.

This story is perfect. I can't imagine ova3 being any better than this. You are obviously a talented writer.

Wow! That was a truly wonderful fic. Its now one of my favorite storys. Especially because you used all of the hints of whats going to happen in then 3rd RYo-ohki OVA. Ryoko will be able to create her light hawk wings in it and Tenchi and "Z". Wow it was just amazing. And I sense some chemistry between Ayeka and Zephr.

*Ayumi *

Wonderful, I loved it! A truly great story with good plot twist.

Ahhhh, so sweet! *wipes tear from eye* I came back to review this SIGNED(the last review was from me) and I just had to read this chapter again. Buh bi!

I'd just like to thank you, since this is the best Tenchi fanfic that I've read in a REALLY long time. I think the plot is wonderful and characters developed well. (Plus Tenchi and Ryoko got together! *squeal*) I plan on reading the sequel soon, but unfortuantly I am burdened with science homework at the moment. *sigh* I'll try to get it done and start reading! YEAH! Keep up the good work :)

Very, very good fic. Interesting and entertaining from start to finish. Hopefully you will be more to come. I definately would like to see it!

-sighs- okay... i once read a Fic about Ryoko's Birthday it was the best fic i ever read... This is the looonnnggest fic i've read so far..and...IT KICKS ASS! you did amazingly vibrant action scenes, best i've seen. You nailed (no pun intened) the Characters emotions on the head. GODDESS should give you a bow for how well you did. damn. i'm speechless (besides from what i said up there). -The Real Ryoko

hey,guys leena here and of course loving the fic!

yes please do continue. Ja-ne (_)

That was a wonderful story. I enjoyed it immensely. I also enjoyed your ending for it; it gave a sense of closure while simultaneously allowing for a sequel. Which brings me to my next point. Please continue this story with a sequel. I hope to read more of your writings in the future.

Excellent story! The sixth wing deal

was really cool! Alot of requests to

go along with that hint of a sequel.

Can't wait!

A very good story, but please do continue this time line! you have left so many possibilities that it would be a shame not to explore them! Anyway, thanks for posting this, it was fantastic.