lol i wonder who created the marvellous character of cilia?? **shifty eyes** me! i lubs cilia!! YAY!! oh and the story disturbs me cause my nickname is mouse! **shiver**

lubs u my smurfette

this was really good! i feel so sorry for ed! keep up the great work and write more very soon!

Ah, it's always better to see on good old . Man, I haven't been on here in forever!! Anyway, not much to say that I haven't already said about the chapter, it's good to see it brought back to life though keep working!!

~DoThePieFace

Hey as promised I said I'd leave you a review after I finished your story.
From the very start I was drawn in by your writing skill, you are very expressive with your words and it made the whole story all the more 'on the edge of my seat' suspense. There is one thing that I didn't like was your changing of the point of view every so often but that's just a personal preference in the end. I believe that you have done all your characters well and you have kept true to their original personalities unlike some stories that I have read.
I was almost in tears when they found Edward again I was just so happy that they had reached him, I also wanted to give poor Alphonse a hug. By the way its official you've now gone and gotten me into these kinds of stories (lol yay inside jokes) I hope to read more of it soon.
Keep writing.
Crimsondagger
P.S I'm going to attempt to draw a few scenes from this ^^

OMG OMG OMG.
I almost cried.
It's been a good while since I've been here ayy??
:}
Great chapter as usual.
Please please please update soon!!

Carrying him out to safety now, good to see.

this was great! they finally found edward! yay!

Aw, bye Cilia.

Lol, you already know I love this story, XD but I review anyway~ because we all love reviews. ^^

What will happen next? Ahh, the suspense.

(SORRY! XD)

~dothepieface

you didnt tell what the inhuman emotion was!! yay they found Ed!

fma.angle xoxo

Ah ello dear. haven't been on here in so long I had no idea they updated the site...T.T

I really need to come up with something and put it on here though...anyway enough meaningless blabber. I think this is very, very well written!! It's very sad, but it's very well written. And I believe the "inhuman feeling" is love..or something close to that...kinda like love at first...sight or something. Just a guess. Probably a bad one.

Anyway love this story, and you.

Please update soon!

this is a great fic... i love it...

and for an idea of what to do to the OC... kill her! yeah i hate OC's! lol XD this is a good fic so please dont wreck it with a stupid OC

damnit i cant figure out what the inhuman emotion is and its going to be bohtering me til i figure it out or til you update!

fma.angle xoxo

This is a pretty decent fic...I'll keep checking on it. ^^ Not sure how I feel about the OCs, though.

Don't worry, I'll keep reading, despite the OCs. Though the almost too-similar personalities bugs me just a bit, I can always ignore it, so it's all good.

Ah, now I really want Ed to go insane before he's able to go back to everyone else. Just the thought of it give me psychotic-fangirl daydreams. Yeah...I am truly a sadistic person...and I love every minute of it. Haha.

Yay, faster upates. That's always a plus. Can't wait for the next addition!

-Puppy

Question: what is a velocaptior?

lol.

Yay! New chapter! I feel proud of this, having it up here, lol. I like contributing. ^^ It's a good story, you'll keep getting better and better though. It's always fun to compare the start of your story with the end.

this was good! i feel so sorry for ed! and i don't know what feeling it could be. well, keep up the great work and write more very soon!