Reviews for Darkness Within The Mind

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Crimsondagger 2008-07-20 ch 10,	abuseHey as promised I said I'd leave you a review after I finished your story. From the very start I was drawn in by your writing skill, you are very expressive with your words and it made the whole story all the more 'on the edge of my seat' suspense. There is one thing that I didn't like was your changing of the point of view every so often but that's just a personal preference in the end. I believe that you have done all your characters well and you have kept true to their original personalities unlike some stories that I have read. I was almost in tears when they found Edward again I was just so happy that they had reached him, I also wanted to give poor Alphonse a hug. By the way its official you've now gone and gotten me into these kinds of stories (lol yay inside jokes) I hope to read more of it soon. Keep writing. Crimsondagger P.S I'm going to attempt to draw a few scenes from this ^^
EarthxAngel 2008-07-09 ch 10,	abuseOMG OMG OMG. I almost cried. It's been a good while since I've been here ayy?? :} Great chapter as usual. Please please please update soon!!
Bar-Ohki 2008-05-13 ch 10,	abuseCarrying him out to safety now, good to see.
Harryswoman 2008-05-06 ch 10,	abusethis was great! they finally found edward! yay!
DoThePieFace 2008-05-05 ch 10,	abuseAw, bye Cilia. Lol, you already know I love this story, XD but I review anyway~ because we all love reviews. ^^ What will happen next? Ahh, the suspense. (SORRY! XD) ~dothepieface
ed's.angel 2008-05-05 ch 10,	abuseyou didnt tell what the inhuman emotion was!! yay they found Ed! fma.angle xoxo
EarthxAngel 2008-03-20 ch 9,	abuseAh ello dear. haven't been on here in so long I had no idea they updated the site...T.T I really need to come up with something and put it on here though...anyway enough meaningless blabber. I think this is very, very well written!! It's very sad, but it's very well written. And I believe the "inhuman feeling" is love..or something close to that...kinda like love at first...sight or something. Just a guess. Probably a bad one. Anyway love this story, and you. Please update soon!
ed's.angel 2008-03-18 ch 9,	abusethis is a great fic... i love it... and for an idea of what to do to the OC... kill her! yeah i hate OC's! lol XD this is a good fic so please dont wreck it with a stupid OC damnit i cant figure out what the inhuman emotion is and its going to be bohtering me til i figure it out or til you update! fma.angle xoxo
Taranova 2008-03-16 ch 9,	abuseThis is a pretty decent fic...I'll keep checking on it. ^^ Not sure how I feel about the OCs, though.
PatrioticPuppy 2008-03-04 ch 9,	abuseDon't worry, I'll keep reading, despite the OCs. Though the almost too-similar personalities bugs me just a bit, I can always ignore it, so it's all good. Ah, now I really want Ed to go insane before he's able to go back to everyone else. Just the thought of it give me psychotic-fangirl daydreams. Yeah...I am truly a sadistic person...and I love every minute of it. Haha. Yay, faster upates. That's always a plus. Can't wait for the next addition! -Puppy
DoThePieFace 2008-03-03 ch 9,	abuseQuestion: what is a velocaptior? lol. Yay! New chapter! I feel proud of this, having it up here, lol. I like contributing. ^^ It's a good story, you'll keep getting better and better though. It's always fun to compare the start of your story with the end.
Harryswoman 2008-03-03 ch 9,	abusethis was good! i feel so sorry for ed! and i don't know what feeling it could be. well, keep up the great work and write more very soon!
Bar-Ohki 2008-03-02 ch 9,	abuseHmm I'm not sure how I feel about Cilia just popping in like that... At all...
lost cause331 2008-03-02 ch 9,	abuseThis was good. My only complaint is not enough Ed torture. One little smack in the chest and some confusion is nothing. I really want to see Mustang's unit save Ed and help him with his now messed up head. Can't wait for the next chapter.
baka deshi 2008-03-02 ch 9,	abuseSo Edward seems to be about at his breaking point - you know, it's a fascinating device to see Envy torture Ed with the promise of being rescued. When Al/Havoc/Roy/etc DO come to rescue Ed, he's not going to believe it...because Envy has been showing up with their faces going "don't worry, I'm here to rescue you!" right before he beats Ed. As far as the new character goes...I'm open to seeing how Cilia will work within the story, but I'll admit I'm generally a bit dubious of adding new characters in without planning first (fandom or otherwise). As a reader, I am perfectly fine waiting for less frequent updates than getting frequent updates that aren't as good. Right now I'm reading this story to follow Edward's ordeal and the attempts to rescue him. If the story switches to become all about Cilia and Envy (and was that a thrill of attraction I detected in Envy there?!), it may be less interesting.

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