Very very awesome. Once again, you are showing a lot of improvement, both in style and in story. I do enjoy how you've developed the plot with the brothers before Sora officially gets there, and there is a nice bit of foreshadowing.

My only critique is that you separate out the different people talking. When it's all smushed together it gets confusing as to who's talking.

But keep going! I really like the way this is going, and can't wait to see what's gonna happen next.

I'm sorry, but... Ninja Turtles? Seriously? I mean, I like TMNT, but to stick it in with the likes of KH and DP? Not that you didn't write it all out really well, I just can't picture it. I'm sorry.

~Ness

Why is Yen Sid's name disney backwards

Another awesome chapter, Casey Jones is so awesome. Keep up the great work. :)

This is a cool story! Update soon please!!

Good story, but I might have to kill Valerie if she gets to close to Riku...
Poor Tucker, wonder which ship he got right, I woulda told him not to do it, but I guess things would be different if I were in charge. What does Axel's clothes look like? You now it has to be something really cool, 'specially when it comes down to Axel.
Cool how ya brought him back.
Still, awesome plot with the Nobodies and everything. Keep writing please!

Lots of things happen in New York! It could be ANYTHING! Tho the first thing that came to mind was Spiderman...? I know, wierd...

Anyway great chapter. Sorry about your Aunt. I didnt have any money over the xmas period either, or even my birthday last week so I sympathise with you.

Anyway update soon!

New York City, you say? I'm going to have to go with Spiderman as my guess as to who this world is focused on! And you're right, I DO love you for including this one!(But not in that way!)

Well, the only movie that I can think of that has something to do with New York and yet would still fit in with KH would probably be The 10th Kingdom. Am I right? Anyway, great chapter. Can't wait for more!

~Ness

hmm... one question, is the world from Super Mario Smash Brothers? >.> just asking... ^-^ anyways, that was a great chappie! please update soon! >.> and i can't wait to see Axel's new duds! X3

Ha, poor Tucker, he tries so hard...Anyways, I like the fact that Jazz recieved magic because she always was kind of a weakling. By the way, I think the world is "Spiderman" or "X-Men". I'm sorry about yor hardships, and may you find peace in this time of turmoil. Read from ya soon.

my guss is jake long or ultimete spider man

This is awesome, my guess would be something to do with TMNT or Marvel Comics. I'm sorry to hear about your great aunt and hope things start looking up for your family. Keep up the great work, my friend. :)

I like it. This story is very original and quite possibly the best DP/KH crossover I've read. Way to go and please update soon.

this chapter was awesome! ^-^ i love this story now. >.> sorry about not reviewing for your other chapters, i saw your story on khinsider and thought since i have a fanfiction account, i'd read it here ^-^ this is a really great story, i love all the plot twists and pairings. >.> th if Jazz is paired up with Axel, i'm going to have to kill her >3 cuz Axel is mine. ^-^ JK! but seriously, Axel's mine. ^-^ i have a KH story of my own if you're intrested in reading it. T~T i really need some advice, cuz i think my story sucks. ^-^ well, please update soon! i'll look forward to it! ~From Saki