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keth1
2008-03-16 . chapter 3
I love it.The alone way to bring curly back too his sense,was for him to watch rhonda and The ColoRed Chuck kiss.For chuckie sake he better angelica never found out what happen.

Well the the colored chuck ever meet the tiny toons and animances series?
loonytunecrazy
2007-11-04 . chapter 3
oretty good
Arnolds Love
2007-11-04 . chapter 3
I liked the ending too! I hadn't been able to read it until now! School's a pain! It was definitely funny and well written! You should write stories more often!!
Arnolds Love
2007-11-03 . chapter 2
Haha, I really liked antennas finding Helga's hostility! It cracked me up! I like the story!
princesslady
2007-11-03 . chapter 3
Btw, love your name. Its so...sexy.LOL
princesslady
2007-11-03 . chapter 1
i usually dont read crossovers but this is good. That is funy. Superhero. LOL. i intend on reading more from you. his is pretty funny.
Hellerick Ferlibay
2007-11-03 . chapter 3
"Like the time you got obsessed with ‘The Lord of The Rings’? You acted like Gollum for three whole weeks." -- oh, a reference to Arnold's Couch Confessions. That was a good story.

I don't know, maybe in Mexico it looks okay, but here in Russia, the country that lost 30 million lives in WWII, the "Heil Hitler" joke seems very inappropriate. Not to mention that I don't understand the logic of it: "Christian" vampires are scared by cross, and judaic ones by swastika...? BTW after the scene I had a thought that maybe the vampire is Harold. So, you imply that Rhonda is liked by Jews?

I can't help but feel bad for Curly. Well, let's hope a red costume will help him.

Good story. I hope to see yet some HA/Rugrats corssover. Having Helga and Angelica in one fic would be really great.
Kisstriss
2007-11-02 . chapter 3
Ooh, finally the mane character was in action too, and its Arnold. Anyway, when I started to read this chapter, suddenly remind be the episode of "All grown up" I dont remeber the eps name, but there Tommy filmed (to capture) scary movie, and there was one guy like vampire!
Its good way, how you ended this story :)
Gitta.
Tayst Strange
2007-11-01 . chapter 3
Amazing ending! "I wonder how I would look in red." Perfect!
Hellerick Ferlibay
2007-10-31 . chapter 2
Hi Ramiro. Actually when I mentioned that you'll tell about Rugrats/AGU I meant that you'll reveal it within the story, not in a message to me. But still thanks.

The second chapter upholds the high standards of the first one. Good jokes, great personalities.

But like many other... er, hispanophones you tend to omit personal pronouns.

BTW, how old Chuck and the girls are? (Don't tell me, mention it in the story)
Tayst Strange
2007-10-30 . chapter 2
Le gasp! Will they hit the vampire? Will he have disapeared? Will it actually just be the pizza man having a really bad day, while the real vampire is stealing their cable?!?!?!?!?! I do not know. That's why I'm waiting for the next chapter!
-Tayst
Kisstriss
2007-10-30 . chapter 2
OOhh it was so funny chapter by the way :)
ColorREd Chuck and other Hey Arnold! characters didn`t seemed to be out of character. And Chuck is in this story "ALL GROWN UP" Right? (Its refrences of RugRats)
Kisstriss aka Gitta
The J.A.M. a.k.a. Numbuh i
2007-10-29 . chapter 2
Nunca me gustaron los Rugrats, pero haces un muy buen trabajo aquí. :D
loonytunecrazy
2007-10-29 . chapter 2
great update plenty action and comdy loved the bit with cuckie mixing the provebs
Hellerick Ferlibay
2007-10-29 . chapter 1
Wow, who could guess you aren't just reviewing machine, but can write stories as well...?

It was extremely funny ("Why don’t you do it? He’ll think we have a dog" -- I nearly had a fit here). The characters are very in character; especially I liked Phoebe and her manner of speech. Your language is a bit strange sometimes though... but nothing very serious.

The only thing I regret about is that I don't know a thing about Rugrats/AGU... Ah well, I guess you'll enlighten me later somewhat.
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