I love Draco's parts. They add a feeling of cunning and mystery, a pure Slytherin flow of events. As rightly stated, those sorted into Slytherin are not always evil, they could be good people too.

I like the changes of POV's. They show many events happening in the school. It guarantees the flow of the story to be very smooth.

I love the EC universe because of the joining of many worlds into one, creating an interesting tale. Whenever I read your EC stories, an unexplained feeling always comes up. Somewhat worldly and light, I suppose. I really hope you update soon.

Draco's many sneaky adventures are becoming very exciting; I can't wait to see more.
They'll got sorted, eh? Trust Edmund to be in Slytherin. I've decided; I like Draco and Edmund the best of all the characters in your series. :D To hotties that desperately need hugs. -Hugs them- :P

Wonderfully done; are you sick of me yet?

Only saw one mistake this time, really - Ron saying "Yeah, you will be. We're seeing the skrewts again on Monday" when you haven't mentioned the skrewts before - just another student mentioning 'really odd creatures' in Hagrid's class, no specifics. Again, readers of the HP series will get it, but those reading the fic from the Narnia series or Dark is Rising will be lost as to why skrewts mean burns.

As always, I love it...please give us the next chapter soon!

Wonderful! I especially loved the Sorting of the Pevensies, the Muggle Studies, History of Magic and DAYD lessons and, well, all the rest! Now you have to write more though.

I see this is going to be one of those chapters where I write the review as I read...I just found a minor plot blunder, and I barely started. You should be more careful how you lift text. You have:

“He’s retired, used to work at the Ministry. He was an Auror, one of the best – a Dark Wizard catcher,” Charlie saw Hermione blink.

But she would know what an Auror is, in the Elijah's Cup storyline, since she's been associating with Sirius and all.
You also have:

Multiple flares of green light later, it was only Ron, Fred, and Charlie in the kitchen.
He pounced. “What rules?”

When, in your version, rules were never mentioned (if I remember right, in the original they're mentioned at the train station by Mrs. Weasley, and you skipped that part and had them Floo instead) until AFTER Ron asks, leaving cause and effect reversed.
You also have Harry wary of Colin Creevey without much explanation - just the barest hint, and no appearances irritating Harry in your previous stories. No problem for those of us who read the original books, of course, but there may be readers who haven't.

I love the way you sorted the Pevensies, although I think Lucy and Peter should be switched. Lucy is just as brave, but it's Peter who 'works hard', putting aside almost everything else, working to keep the family safe and hidden.

I also like you introducing a Hufflepuff main character. That house tends to be rather underrepresented.


I apologize if I came over as over-critical. I love your work. I'm a bit of a bibliophile though, and hope to be a teacher one of these years, so I can't help but try to fix errors when I see them. I hope you take this review as constructive advice rather than as a flame.

Awesome!
When are you going to update this again?

I have just finished reading through all the EC universe stories. I cannot wait for the next instalment. This has been the first crossover I have found for HP and Narnia that has depth and convincing storyline. I do like how you have incorporated the links to the other fandoms that you have been adding.

Please update soon

I love what you've done so far! The four Pevensies really do fit the four houses, and Will's first History of Magic class was extraordinary! I wish I had him as a teacher - though maybe only if I was just auditing the class and didn't have to do all the homework. Will we ever get to see Will's power as an Old One? With Aslan's four Kings and Queens of Narnia, an Old One, a King of Terebithia, and the last heir of a High Family, not to mention all the ordinary witches and wizards of Hogwarts, the Light has quite a few defenders. I shudder to think of what the Dark will manage to muster against them. The hints about Peter's troubles at work are really interesting; I almost feel sorry (though mostly angry) at the two idiots who think it's a good idea to try to kidnap him. Keep up the great work! I have never yet read anything by you I didn't enjoy!

*pokes you* You know you want to continue this. And yes, I'm going through _everything_ in your profile. My brain needs food and you're a _good_ writer, a perilously rare creature amidst the hordes of fanfolk who couldn't spell properly if their lives depended on it. *pokes you one more time for good measure*

Oh, yes! I never thought of it in that light, really, about the Pevensies being Sorted, but it's so startlingly appropriate!

Hmm, Will's lesson is really nice- s'pose it's a big cut above Binns. Lovely divergence from the HP universe...the way it clings so much to canon and yet splits off.

Brilliant!

-Dante Inferno

I have to say, I've just read the whole series of fics(3 times) and can't wait for the next chapter. When is it due? I want to prepare a Christmas tree in advance since it'll feel like Christmas come early, you see. Or (gasp) art thou suffering from the lethal sickness as the Writer's Block? If that's the case, please know that your fans(including I) are ready to go after it with pitchforks. Hahaha. Please update soon!^0^

i thought the saying was " don't get mad get glad"

hm. a weekks oueth hes gonna lose

oh. i imaging a cute little scared boy. the " imposter " bowed. could he feel the power. thr power of kings and queens

I discovered your "Elijah's Cup" fanfics a few days ago, and so far, have been impressed. What I enjoy most about them is that you've found a way of doing a Chronicles of Narnia/Harry Potter crossover that (to me) works.

I'd long been sceptical about such a thing; the mere notion of the Pevensies as attending Hogwarts struck me as foreign to the tone of the Chronicles of Narnia. But you had a great solution; they aren't wizards, but they have a grace breathed upon them by Aslan that allows them to enter the wizarding world, be immune to its spells, and maybe draw it to a higher level. Even the Sorting Hat scene works here.

I can especially see the value of Edmund being in Slytherin; who better to dissuade the students there from being lured into Voldemort's cause (and while Slytherin might be stereotyped by the rest of the wizarding world, cunning and ambition - combined with an awareness of how they're perceived by those who aren't Slytherins - can be just the character traits to tempt you into joining the Death Eaters) than someone who'd been lured into the service of the White Witch and came to understand the terrible consequences of his actions and repent of them?

I hope to see more of this crossover saga from you.