Oonn ! Poor Asch =( ! But Natalia and Asch are the best pairing =D

Aww, i feel so bad for both of them.I mean Natalia probably thinks Asch doen't want to be around her and Asch can't confess cuz he's gonna die.(cry cry).Asch's feelings were portrayed very well with all that anger directed at his 'replica'.The ending was a good one.'Affable Idiots'

Ah, teh angst... So depressing, but yet so wonderful. Asch was portrayed excellently, as was Natalia, and I could really feel Asch's frustration as if it were my own. Great work.

Very descriptive and in character; I could easily see it happening that way. Good work!

Ah man...I wish this were canon. Can you imagine, Asch being rude for that reason?

Your description was colorful, and I really enjoyed reading this. The last paragraph is particularly amazing and it depicts Luke and Asch perfectly, and how they are not so different. Excellent work!! Thanks for writing this fanfic.

That was so cute! You should definitely write random fluff more often :)

AW That was so beautiful. Thanks so much for the birthday fic. I love it so much. *glomp* And Natalia is so not out of character. I could picture the whole thing. And the description you use was gorgeous.