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| Muria 2008-08-03 ch 31,  | abuseIt's a nice way to end it. There's a very set tone in this, and it stays hopeful, despite all else... |
| FinnFiona 2008-08-02 ch 31, | abuseYou've got a great series here! Clever idea, good insights... I think you've got a handle on a lot of the nuances of many of these characters as well... And kudos to you for switching up the writing style according to subject and feeling, but still letting it feel cohesive. Lovely job, keep up the good work! |
| Rose of the West 2008-08-02 ch 31, | abuseI like this discussion of Harry and without drawing arrows, making it clear how different he is from the Voldemort of the last chapter. Great read, from beginning to end. |
| Rose of the West 2008-08-02 ch 30, | abuseAh ha, and he'll decide it's in the blood... |
| Rose of the West 2008-08-02 ch 29, | abuseSpooky. |
| Rose of the West 2008-08-02 ch 28, | abuseYou hear Ron's side of what happened after he reunites with Harry and Hermione. He must have been so lonely and worried on the days he was wandering around trying to find them... |
| Rose of the West 2008-08-02 ch 27, | abuseThat's how I see the guy. |
| Rose of the West 2008-08-02 ch 26, | abuseI can't quite see what's happening at the end, but it's very good, and bitter, and sad, and Sirus. |
| Rose of the West 2008-08-02 ch 25, | abuseIt's very sweet. I hope he finally makes a suggestion or two to Hannah. A girl likes to be asked, you know. Meanwhile, I'm glad that it's Harry who knows he will be strong when he gets older. It does very well to describe how Harry sees Neville through the cannon. |
| Rose of the West 2008-08-02 ch 24, | abuseI can't read enough about the Prewett brothers. Great one. |
| Rose of the West 2008-08-02 ch 23, | abusePretty good, actually. I like the way the logical and emotional sides of her are discussing this. |
| Rose of the West 2008-08-02 ch 22, | abuseWow. Quite telling, and of course understanding the one relationship makes a lot of his later actions make sense. |
| Rose of the West 2008-08-02 ch 21, | abuseIt took me a few minutes, because of the Marauder's Map, but I figured it out. Wonderful sketch. |
| Rose of the West 2008-08-02 ch 20, | abuseDelightful! |
| Rose of the West 2008-08-02 ch 19, | abuseHm...Draco is still Draco. Entirely likely. Having his bacon saved probably would have made him more defiant than grateful. |