I don't get why he did that though. How is that revenge, it's more like he did that for his enjoyment than for revenge. But whatever, your the writer. Just explain it to me if you would please.

\(*0*)/ Unexpectedly good!! I like how you reference the Faun's bitterness about his fairies; it's more believable that way. A very difficult pairing to write about, to be sure. Great job! :D

This was a good story.

Wow, I really liked the feel of this chapter. I especially enjoyed how you *implied* the graphic stuff, instead of getting all into it and junk. That's just something I appreciate (o:

A great fanfic, I didnt see this one coming but you pulled it off perfectly ^^ Great job!!

Okay, those other reviewers must me quite mad. X3
That was disturbing, but pretty dang awesome.
I'm more scarred by Transforemers pairings than this stuff, really. Nice work.

First, it was very well written. Secondly, that wasn't really revenge... I clicked expecting to read rape (non-con) and murder (revenge). For most intents it seemed the Pale man enjoyed it. Finally if a person is reading this I'd assume they have seen the movie but, at the same time more description of how the creatures looked would have been awesome.

Yo, Chetana! It's me Heather, {From Deviant Art!!] ^__^;

I added you into my Favorite Author's List, Dearie!
Like I said, this story is disturbing, and Beautifully
written! Keep up the Great work!!

♥Heather♥

How exactly was that revenge? It was rather disturbing really. The writing wasn't bad though. Oh and had you looked at the extra features after the movie you would know that once Ofelia had taken the knife the Pale Man died. So Pan would have had no chance for revenge.

Ok, this tale is obviously very dark and creepy and exceptionally well written. Having said that, I never want to read it again. Seriously. You have disturbed me to the point of needing therapy.