Oh, please don't leave this! It is avarice, it's an addiction. Please write more like this!

Ow ... that's like that scene in 'Lois and Clark' where Clark tells Lois that he's in love with her and she says she only likes him as a friend and then goes and says to Lex, 'Yes, I will marry you.' (Idiot girl.)

'He is loved by none.' That's not true, I love Sevvie-poo!

And I swear I didn't mean that to rhyme, nor sound as off.

SOO sad. I loved how you used the title in there, and the greed, and her wanting to go inside, and the blissfulness he is feeling, and the descriptions, and this beautiful, beautiful story! Splendiforous! (newest adjective!)

Aww, so sad and beautiful. I LOVED this! Very cute, how he just wants to watch her sleep, and their heartbeats together...so perfect!

(Sorry for the short reviews-its 3 AM, and I really should be in bed...xD)

Awsome, awesome chapter! I love how her Gryffindor life is taking over, and he is finding similarities between himself and a piece of thread! Random, but moving. Awesome!

AMAZING! I LOVED this! The "she's...she's DEAD" sound so like one of SNape's memories its almost creepy! Fantastic chapter!

SO sad. I LOVED this. AMAZING! The second-to-last line was so sad and beautiful, and how at least he's gotten it off his chest. Great chapter!

I LOVED this! I am totally OBSESSED with dessert of any kind, so this is totally FANTASTIC! Very cute! I loved Severus' changing his mind about it all. Amazing chapter!

SO perfect! I loved this! Her special traits that make him love her are SO adorable. And they are so perfect, so in character, so like two little best friends with not a care in the world would be like. Fabulous!

LOVED it! THe choice between the two...between the mystery and the 'open book' as you expressed SO well. I loved the comparing between them, and her choice. Great!

Amazing! The second-to-last paragraph was SO perfect. How they are opposites works SO well. Marvelous (haha! New adjective!) chapter!

Soo sad and beautiful! I LOVED this! How Sev is feeling is so real and depressing and perfect. And the time thing fits SO well. Fantastic chapter!

I LOVED it! The description is so beautiful, and the quote (is that a quote? the thing in italics) was so perfect. I loved it! Awesome!

AWW! Soo sweet, I LOVED this! I loved the carriage/engine thing, and the end is SO sweet. And her laugh...you are AMAZING at descriptions, on the whole. SO beautiful!