i love love this story plaese update asap!!

hm. very interesting
sorta hard to read (grammer, spelling, all that) but it's a cool thing. hope you're going to keep adding on!

awesome! i luv ur story, it's so cool! plz update asap!

Very nice so far. It's okay to start over. I'm doing the same with my Byrus Liberation story, which I felt had some mistakes in the first few chapters.

Anyways it's good so far. The whole LoTR explaination was funny since it reminds me of the various timesI have to explain LoTR to many people.

not bad, i like it!! I think it's going better than the original version.
continue and update soon!

i love it! but it is true about the lord of the rings movies. start quest, distracted and then finish.
it took them three movies to do all that!

Awsome!

Hey!, It have the looks of been a good fic, hope you up-date soon because it`s really awesome, jeje per se good start for the fic!.

Good Luck Writting the Next Chapter
and
Bye

I think it's good! Please continue as soon as you can!