aww that was good ;)

Such an amazing story! You are great at imagery!

I liked the whole thing! Even the hospital parts... Especially the apocalypse thing. I think you should continue it with the recovery, maybe with Jules putting the chapstick on him. ;-D

I loved this story! very exciting. great job! ]

Great story! I liked the hospital parts, and you did a great job speaking on fire. I just wish we could have heard what Jules, the Chief, and Lassiter had to say:)

Aw, love it! Needs more! Write a Lassie scene!

Cool story. I don't think any of it was bad, but the part during the fire was more detailed. Awesome job. And good luck in your future with any other fire scares (I'm a firefighter, so I know how scary that stuff can be).

This was a very cute fic! I thought for sure we'd get to see some Jules though...

That was a really intense story! And I like the way in was in honor of the of the California Blazes. I have friends over there, and I have been worried about them. But everything is ok right now. Hopefully everything will be ok. This was an Awesome story! Like always!

This is a really good one-shot. It was very intense and powerful. I live on the East Coast, so I don't know the horrors of California fires, but I have been following the story on the news, and it's absolutely terrible.

I was wondering how long it would take before someone posted a wildfire story.

But I did like this. One thing though, I didn't really like the Shawn pov once Shawn's in hospital, esp. the use of the crash cart (Shawn wouldn't remember that, and it seemed really artifical). Still, overall I liked the story. I especially liked Henry at the end; wouldn't have minded seeing Lassiter as well, but you can't have everything.

Good show!

-Olivia

This was really good. My favorite part was the first part, but I liked the hospital parts too. I've just started hearing about the fires a little while ago. It's good to know that they seem to be getting under control.

Anyway, I really liked that last line about the Blistex, and the part where Shawn was in the fire was beautifully written. Hope to see more from you soon!