I like it...I really like it...:)

This is beautiful. I mean... I really, realy liked it!

I can't find words to describe, because this story is really something else :)

Well, congratulations! :D


Kisses,
Cla.

ps> I'm so sorry about any grammar mistakes that I made, but I'm Brazilian and I often forget that I can't think in Portuguese and write in English, hehe :p

my god...that was by far 1 of d best stories i've read!
lily told the tale so well...
i just totally got lost in the story!
really good...

I totally cried when I read this. It had amazing voice, and it was just beautifully written.

I wish Lily and James could have grown old together.

I'll admit I was hesitant to read this because it was so AU (both being muggles and whatnot), but I really liked it! I thought it felt a little rushed at times, but it was a nice story overall. Good job!

that was really good

Aw, I really liked this, which was surprising since I don't usually like stories that remove them from magic, but this was so sweet and really well-written!

That was really cute.
I really liked it - lily's voice was really well written.
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This story is beautifully written. It is different from the other James and Lily fanfiction, but in a good way of course. I really like how you use the same line at the beginning and at the end to show how they changed over time, as well as the way you set up the story - retelling their lives through Lily's eyes. James is so innocent when he's a child, and really sweet as a teenager. This story was well-written. Good job! Keep up the good work!

i luvv this story, its so-o-o sweet!!

Aww..that was the most beautiful thing I have read in a long time. I loved that so much. It was differet, something that I like. I think that you captured the image really well and the beauty just kept pouring out!
It was amazing, the way you wrote this. It is truly wonderful. The story has magic in it without intending there to be.
I can't help but drabble on about how brilliant this is.
Thankyou a million!