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APatchOfSunlight
2010-01-02 . chapter 1
I liked this! I actually stumbled on this on somebodies fanfiction quote's page.

Thanks for this.

-Josey
ghost4
2009-12-28 . chapter 1
I was just pointed to this story and I had to tell you it was wonderful. So sweet, and so in character.

Thanks for sharing.
Koolneko22
2009-12-17 . chapter 1
This was nice.

Poor guys. They have so many problems...
Kagollie
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
awe! I love confused Sammy! and big brother Dean is great to! loved it!
sidjack
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
This is Gold. Every single word, every question and every time Dean takes the time to answer with love and patience is GOLD!

Great job, so funny and sweet and Sam being so concussed is just precious beyond words. I enjoyed this so much, this is the best example of Dean being the Awesomest Big Brother ever.

Well done and I would love to see the next day. You think Sam would pull his leg a little? Be embarrassed when he does remember the way back from the car and how sweet Dean was.

Anyway, loved this, really.

sid
Shannanigans
2009-05-19 . chapter 1
That was really good! I'd love to read a more fleshed-out version.
AnickaMarie
2009-04-27 . chapter 1
That was great. Concussed, confused Sam is awesome!
bhoney
2009-04-05 . chapter 1
Loved the injection of humor throughout: “Dude, I saw you in Hamlet… I said entertain the thing, not put it to sleep.”

This just broke my heart. So sad: "It was getting to the point where it was almost impossible to see life anymore. When he was a kid, he had had so much hope. He had had a future. Now he had a dead family, dead friends, and Hell." Sam asking about whether their dad, him, and Dean were each dead was heart-wrenching and, I'm sure, really confusing for him.

And I loved the ending, Sam's trust in Dean, and how it all took on a deeper meaning: “You don’t need to, Sammy. I got everything under control. Just trust me.” “We’re okay?” “We’re okay.”

Nice job on this!
FictionalRemnant
2009-03-05 . chapter 1
Man this was funny. (Not Sammy getting hurt of course) but the conversation… poor Dean :D

You did a brilliant job. Well Done!
Mikiya2200
2009-01-26 . chapter 1
I can't believe it took me SO LONG to come across this story... What can I say, I LOVE it! I was laughing so hard at Sam asking all the same questions over and over again and then went from giggling like mad to trying to fight the lump in my throat when Sam asked, "Is Dad dead?". Awesome one-shot, wonderful description of how protective and caring Dean is, absolutely in-character and absolutely brilliant! Goes straight to my favourites!

*takes a bow and goes on reading*
MKofGod
2008-10-25 . chapter 1
Sam reminds me of my mom when she underwent a surgery that required anesthesia. Dude - you got the repeating questions spot on.

Well done!
novashanti
2008-09-12 . chapter 1
*shudders* Sorry had a flash back to a babysitting experience when I was 15. Poor Dean, I'd have throttled Sam long before they could get back to the car if I'd been in his shoes. Made me laugh.
LittleLonnie
2008-09-11 . chapter 1
Aw haha this was cute and funny and very well written! Goes straight to my fave list!
spnMom
2008-09-10 . chapter 1
Aw, poor Sam... Dean was really patient with all the questions... Nice story, thanks.
writergirl94
2008-09-02 . chapter 1
i loved sam asking the same questions. lol. aw dean!

GOOD JOB
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