very nice stroy. pwease reveiw

Definately interesting... And there was Mai thinking Natsuki was pregnant... This was very interesting indeed... And extremely blush-inducing. I thought it was pretty cute how Natsuki was taking care of her.

This fic is really wierd, I merely suggest you NOT to continue in this way. Before reading this I red your other fics and I really enjoyed them, but this ... this is so much OOC and ... Making Natsuki such sort of mentally abnormal person ...

Anyway I hope your next fic will be better.

This was really weird...

But then, a lot of people would say that just about two women being together. And Natsuki really seems to care for Shizuru in this fic, since she does things like this for her that she isn't even truly interested in, just to make Shizuru happy. So I guess it's ok :) Anyways, even if it weirded me out a little, it was a well-written story and I'm interested to see where you take it, if you decide to continue.

oh. my. gawd.

this is certainly ... different. i kind of ... liked it? well, i am a perv so...

i suggest a change in rating though.

this fic is so messed up
let me guess, you got the idea from otome and Tomoes creepy fetish (which is all the worse for being implied)

the bits with Mai are funny
im going to stop reading now...

I saw the warning and I thought "pshh it cant be THAT bad!" I was reading it and like.. I would stop for no reason. THEN I would start again and then I got to a point when my brain said " I have had enough! ENOUGH IS ENOUGH! DONT READ THIS DAMN THING IT WILL RUIN YOU!" So... yeah. Had a really good start.. the start...

Oh my god. That was just sick, but still dragged me in and wouldn't let me out till the end.

For the love of Shiznat, please rate this an M now.

Um...cool!! I think Shizuru would be a very cute baby. She seems like she would try almost anything as long as it was with Natsuki. OMG, I wonder what's going to happen when Mai or anyone else decides to start snooping!! Keep it up!

great writing style, love it. just a little freaked out. uhh...don't know what to say honestly.

I'm kinda creeped out. Shizuru doesn't really seem like she'd be 'into' this kind of thing...just creepy. You have a good style of writing...this is just...creepy. *Shudders* CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY.CREEPY!

Umm,wow. This is weird. Really weird. But I like you writing style.

uhm..okay. confused and weirded out.

um I don't know how I feel about that?
it's weird, I guess ^^"
sorry - -" didn't hate it though.

oO
That was sick, indeed. But...


I liked it oO