a good read. The author never fails to satisfy, always delivers a good story.

Nicely done! I liked it!

~Robi

Me: I think this is really good.
Vix (she is very monotone): Man the brainiac has a good life descibed here. Crystal here is very relatively speechless. Something about this screams that all chaos is about to break lose. Yeah!
Me: Vix shut up and go make up a new idea, daydream about some random guy or something please! You get me all depressed.
Vix: How 'bout you shut your trap and sleep!
Kat: I hate when the different sides of my writer's personality conflict. Especially when they are tired. I hope they go to sleep soon.
Me: Sounds good for some reason.
Kat: It is called you worked on a project for a few hours.
Me: Right, I have lost my friend called memory.*Kat and Vix simple hits their foreheads in response*

Ooh, another jealus enemy, though this ones a rival. It'll be interesting to see how Cornelius defeats an enemy nearly as smart as he is. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I love it so far. I like your writing style & it's an interesting idea.

Update ASAP

Another great new story in progress with Wilbur wanting money. I swear that boy is irresponsible, but great start. :)

LadyFiona02

The author has an excellent imagination. I enjoy how the story is worded and look forward to more entries of this particular story. If the author looks as good as she writes...OMG.

Great story so far!

It sounds very interesting, and I just love the character interaction! :)

Great job, can't wait until you update!

Very interesting. I like it.

One thing, though: Cornelius graduated high school and college at age 14. Does that mean Raymond is older?

Again, interesting, and update soon!

~Robin