That. was. Amazing. I loved the things added in parenthases, and the title suits the story perfectly. It was very deep and made me think, and its hard to find people who can write like that. I'm proud to say you captured it well. Keep up the good work, this is one of my top-10-faves of all time fanfictions.

OMG WOO! i couldnt tell if it was meant to end happy or sad but i still liked it

yeah im just that aweosme i can like it when i dont know what it is.

abooya!

:O ok wow. I hate SasuSaku with the burning intensity of a million suns, but this was one of the best/most well written fics I have ever read. What I liked the most was the believable, un-sappy interaction between Sasuke and Sakura. And the whole 'touch the sky' idea thing was kinda sweet .

Good job, and well done!

I've never thought of it that way. Ninja isn't a job or an obligation or a curse- it's a LIFE. That's cool. I like how you think.

Awesome awesome awesome SQUEE. Boo-rah.

This was a very good and realistic interpretation of Sakura and Sasuke's relationship. I very much enjoyed it. I like Sakura being the stronger one and realizing where her strength lies. Standing up to Sasuke was the first step towards realizing that.

Thank you for sharing!

EA

you know, this isn't really that angsty...but I still love it!

I enjoyed how you connected her dreams and her life, and how she didn't want to visit sasuke and hated him (a new take which I like).

This is really well written. It really flows together. And I really enjoyed reading it.

I haven't finished reading yet, but i just wanted to point out tat i absolutly love the spastic kitten part!

Also, I luv the whole story! XD

Ta!

Wow, this is really pretty! Its, like, almost-prose. Really poetic, yeah? And I like your "skewed perception." Its original, and I love the way you looked at it, the extended theme of dreams and dreaming. Great job!

beautiful

the was delicious!

yes..i said delicious. anyways.

this should have more reviews, i liked it.

you're views on sasusaku are accurate, well that's how

i view their relationship as well.

:3 goodwrite!

WOW. that was so good! Freaking hell! UR a natural!

::gapes:: This is fantastic. Just...fantastic.

I hope there's another chapter.

that was AWESOME!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

che! I love it! I mean sure... some may not construe it as romantic...but I think is a way it really is. :D totally faving