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| Evil M 2008-05-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseDON"T GIVE UP! This is GREAT! I love it so much. Please continue! |
| mochiusagi 2007-12-01 ch 2,  | abuseaw poor harry. Please update soon! |
| BlueSky.x 2007-11-05 ch 2, | abuseI think this is great so far its a really orginal idea and i cant wait to read the rest of it so please dont give up! you'll get much more reviews as you get on with the story so just keep going with it, its really good and I think your writing style is great! I'd love it if you updated! |
| Kichi Hisaki 2007-11-03 ch 2, | abuseThis fanfic shows promise. I like it a lot. Hehe, what I really liked was the last chapter. The list of Draco's sins was funny, and I can't help but think that the parts where the list was interrupted by Draco's thinking kept on going dispite the pauses. Anyways, update soon! ^_^ |
| Kyla Mizuki 2007-10-29 ch 2, | abuseAw.. I like this so far! ^_^ Poor Harry, he seems really torn up about this... I liked the way you started the second chapter and how even Ron felt bad about Draco's death... I said, "Aw..!" and everything, lol. xD Great work! |
| Sarah the mutant farm girl 2007-10-28 ch 2, | abuse...Nope you're dry humor didn't work. I'm just glad that today isn't rainy as it has been the past few days. Wouldn't that just make this wonderful chapter pack that much more of a punch? I hate and adore when the weather reflects that of books... I loved it. I really wish I could write the trio as well as you can. You are brilliant! PLEASE update soon! I fear I shall quickly fall into withdraws if you don't. Its too good! I don't want to wait *pouts*. |
| Zoekske 2007-10-28 ch 2, | abuseOh dear PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! im lovin it !:) LOOVVEE EIT ZOE |
| One Of The Fallen 2007-10-28 ch 2, | abuseWhy does EVERYTHING happen to Harry?Story's good. |
| Iamhappytojustbealive 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseUpdate or Face my wrath! |
| AnimeAlexis 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseVery cool start. Is Lily gonna be important? She is Lily Evans, right? Update soon please!! |
| Sarah the mutant farm girl 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseOkay so my morning has sucked and I've only been awake for about an hour of it but this helps major! You've written Draco flawlessly! I adore the whole thing so far. Brilliant idea! His death is humorous, and I'd think it was all a joke too the way its set up. PERFECT! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Just-A-Broken-Pencil 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is amazing! I love how you subtly included Lily as the gardian, though Draco does seem a little over-reactive. But than again, if you were suddenly on a cloud with a person telling you you were dead, I guess that could happen. But I also love love love the beggining! Keep it going! |