You really should make another chapter...it does not sound perfect with suddenly you put the end of chapter 1...you should make the story longer than let it hang until this chapter...need improvement and plot seems to be unstable...

hi!

Nice fic! Hope you continue it soon! I want to know if Tsuzuki after 2 years of being partner of Hisoka is going to need one?

Oh a snake shikigami! awsome! Update soon.onegai? *puppy eyes*

Ja ne!

-Senko-

PD:Sorry for grammar or spelling mistakes english isn't my mother language...

AWESOME! PLease update! I wannaread the next chappie .

I know I've already reviewed, but you have to update this story! Don't let it die! It's so good, and I'd definitely read it if you continued! Hell, you got 32 reviews on a 2 chapter story. It took me about ten chapters to get that many. Please update!

ARGH! How come the good stories are never finished? This is great. Very well written, and an awesome plot. I can't even find any grammar mistakes to comment on! Please oh please continue this story! I know it's been two years since you last updated, but there's still hope!

you can't stop there!

*whines* No! Don't let 'soka leave!
Please hurry and update. You're taking way too long and this fic is starting to make me cry with its "unfinished-ness" ( _;) So update soon, ne?

*whines* No! Don't let 'soka leave!
Please hurry and update. You're taking way too long and this fic is starting to make me cry with its "unfinished-ness" ( _;) So update soon, ne?

it's a great story Please continue. *squeal* I just love HisokaxTsuzuki stories. Please finish. and email me when it's done I just love it. *stars at the Computar screen and doesn't let go wating for chapter 2 to come out.* lol Ja

ur gonna update soon right? Caus ethis is really good and I wanna know what happens!

I love it! So that was the reason about Hisoka's condition. What would happen then? You wouldn't really make him retired right? Please post the next chapter quickly!

Yay! (Semi)new chapter! You write so well. _

Me likes. *nod nod* Will wait for new chapter (sooooooooon hopefully!)

the changes are much better _ but i need to read more! (poor soka-chan)

AAAAAIIYAAAHHHHHHH,...*ssiiiggghhhhh*...ya know,...this fic of yours is good,...VVVVERYYYYYYY DAAAMNNNNNN good i tell ya,...the only downside to it is,...you updated it SOOOOOOOOOO DAAAMNNNN SLOWWWW,...*pout*...i mean,..i've been reading it,...and re-reading it for,..Ohhh,..i duno,...

million,..gezillion times already,...and been waitin Tooooo Daaaamnnnnn loooonnggg for yer-next chapter,...*pout somemore*...and everytime i thought that yer-gona put new chapter,...ya don't,...it's Soooooooo damn frustrating i tell ya,...i'm sorry for bitchin here,...*rubs head sheepishly*...what i'm tryin to tell ya is,...your fic is VEEEERRRRYYYYYYY GGOOOOODDD,..and i RRREAAALYYYYYYYY hope that ya will keep-on writing it and PPPLLEAASEEEEEEE,...*begs on hands and knees*...CCCCONNTINUEEEE soon,...OONEGAAAIIIIII?...have mercy on us fans,...*puppy-dog-eyes*...till yer-next new chapter,...keep-up the good work,.. JAAAAAAAAAAAAA and GAAANBAATEEEE-NEEEE!_!