Loved the ending... Rush is being such a liar. Too bad Envy's gone, I liked him. But Rush will make a good replacement. I can't wait for Begun by Blood. I know it'll be good.

OMG! *scream* I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE ENDING! Sure, it wasn't happy, but I'm really glad with the way you finished. :D Totally unexpected (as you said) and it was just pure GENIUS! The fight scene was incredibly done (as usual) and the exchange between Pride and Rush at the end was also amazingly done!

But now I've so many questions... Like where Rai is and what happened to Kimiko and everyone else... where are Jack and Nina and who were those kids with Raimundo? What will happen now that Rush has replaced Envy? I really hope you update soon cuz the suspense is already starting to kill me!

AWESOME WORK ON THIS! I can't wait for more from you!^^

xxFireWarriorxx

GAH! OH MY GOSH! That was AMAZING! It's awesome when stories aren't always so happy--and this was done incredibly!

The fight scene was done greatly, and you're always good with fight scenes.

And Rush...Ohmygod...I knew it was coming but it's so sad either way. =( Envy had a good exit, and the whole "when they can't scream" thing was a good line to have Rush just go crazy at.

Just one thing though that left me confused. Where the heck did Master Fung go? Are we still not supposed to know that until Begun by Blood? But otherwise, great job!

And you left a lot of questions, (what happened to Jack & nina, who were those kids in Raimundo's unconscious state, and what's going to happen to everyone else...) please start the new story soon, I'm dying to know what happens!

WOW... There is NO WAY I can express HOW FREAKING AMAZING this chp was in a measly review... IT WAS AMAZING AND I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!

AWESOME battle scenes - I esp loved the one with Jack - it was just SO CUTE! I can actually totally see Jack just snapping like that. He and Nina are the cutest thing ever!^^ I can't wait to see what you meant by the "glow" that's happened with him...

And awesome job on the part with Rai and Pride too. The black wings and sword was ingenious, and I could totally picture the scene in my head as I read.

Well, I won't rant any longer. :D Update soon! Can't wait to see the big, dramatic end!

xxFireWarriorxx

PS: I think I recall you saying hamster will play a major role at the end... is that one of the twists? Although I doubt that's right since you are like, a genius at creating twists! Which reminds me... where's the real Master Fung?

if anybody actually guesses the huge thing... they're like a genius. Cool black angel wing thingy with Rai. He's going to kick so much butt. I like the story behind Jack and Gabriel. It made everything between them make sense. Can't wait until the next chapter!

Wow. Speechless here.

First off--I loved Jack's scene the best! Great dialog especially. So whatever Riko and Raven have, Jack has it too right? Only I'm not sure what 'it' is. Either it's a surprise or I'm just plain stupid.

Julia and Elena's teamwork was awesome. I thought you described this fight the best out of all of them. Saya and Clay's was the funniest, just because they were so sarcastic through most of it. (Well, except when they lost...) Wrath...Wrath's just psycho. He scares me. Mimi sorta does too, when she starts to get totally ** and starts screaming in French. XD

I really liked Kimiko and Wuya's fight, (the "you underestimate us" was a cool line.) Kim gets hurt a lot by Wuya a lot in this story...

And of course, Pride's thing was just amazing.

Black angel wings plus black sword = total awesomeness. I could really picture that scene in my head. I wish I could draw...I want to draw that fight scene so badly!

Replacement sins... I didn't think they were that easy to find. I take it the next chapter will be a big battle scene where somebody dies and somebody wins... can't wait! Too bad that the end of the story's getting so much closer.

I liked how this chapter didn't just focus on one or two people but pretty much focused on... well everybody. Cool! I'm gonna read the next one now.

i luv this chapter!
rush has my fav. shen gong wu (Kazusu Atom)and you had my fav. charater fight lord pride.

update right now mister...plz

OMG! I swear I was literally jumping out of my seat as I read this! I mean, talk about AMAZING! I loved the suspense you've built and the description was amazing as well. :D I LOVE the new sins and the phrases you had the characters say were dead on - amazing and something totally imaginable! I LOVE IT!^^

UPDATE SOON!

xxFireWarriorxx

PS: AWESOME twist you added with Gabriel - love it!

Best...chapter...ever! I absolutely loved it! the replacement sins were totally awesome, especially the new Wrath. ("Ha! I never get tired of that!" Awesome line. =D)

And of course, great match-up's too. I'm extremely excited to see these fights. Update soon please!

Oh yeah, Gabriel? TOTALLY awesome plot-twist! And he was Jack's brother...for a few moments on the last chapter I thought he was Jack's dad. But having a dad kill his own son...yikes. o_0

Dude, you are like, AMAZING at writing! I absolutely LOVE this! And I guess the question that's killing me most right now is who was pretending to be master fung... haha, ol' Clay was so blunt about it too. lol! Update soon!

xxFireWarriorxx

oh come on, Omi killing someone
i know that it wasn 't master fung but really, Omi killing, with a knife, across the neck

but it was a good chapter and Rai is healed so i guess i'm happy with that

~windXSchick

WHOA! What an awesome twist! That was amazing! I was sure Wuya was gonna get it when all of a sudden Pride decides to award her... I LOVED IT! Although I was surprised you offed Gluttony... since he was "ruler" in the "future" I was sure he would survive longer... Guess not. :D

Anyways, update soon! I'm totally loving this!

xxFireWarriorxx

PS: So many new questions now... lol!^^

Sorry I didn't review the last chapter. Anyways, I'd forgotten all about Gluttony. Thank god Envy's still there (he's still my favorite). It was pretty cool to have a Sin centered chapter. Thank god that part with Pride and Lust wasn't what I thought it was. Update soon!