Although I'm slightly confused as to where this situation takes place, I did enjoy it.

wow. this chapter was extremely touching! i'm glad peter's not dead. and i'm glad he's back! the way you described nathan carrying him, with tears and soot on his face... beautiful. i'm adding this to my favorites!

woop! i liked it, very well done! ill look out for your otherheroes ones hehe!

That was great! I can't wait next chapter!

dang! this is tense! i like it! i really want to find out what happens next! i've always loved the whole "brother" thing with nathan and peter (peter is my favorite character on the show), so it's great to read a story pertaining to that. good work! i'll be patiently (or maybe not so patiently) awaiting an update!

no! you can't leave us hanging like that! but that was excewant! please please do more soon, its very interesting and tense! keep it up :)!

no, not peter! update soon please

no for once a kick ** peter fic and it is a cliff hanger. evil evil cliff hanger
I hope you update soon

This is a brilliant next chapter, and you really know how to create a cliff hanger!
I can't wait to read the next one!
Update soon please :)

wow this is awesome! please do more soon i love it!

I like it very very much! I've been looking for some good later in the second season kinds of stories and, quite honestly, yours in the first I've found worth reading. I really hope you'll keep going!

:D good story

omg, that's so dramatic! what's gonna happen?!?!? that line was great, "Half of him couldn’t believe this could be happening; the other half would die all over again if it wasn’t." that was just a wonderful line, great job!

Ah a cliffhanger...really like this

good start