i reeeeaaaaallly hope goldenstar lets ginger stay in the clan

i don't get why goldenstar is pressuring cedarpaw to be the one in the prophecy? if he says he's not than he's not

i think rowanpaw was brave to scare off those dark pelted rogues

will they see the two-leg again?

how does cedarpaw know it's rowanpaw the prophecy is talking about?

poor gingerpaw- seeing the scene with her foster parents must have really clawed her heart

Poor gingerpaw. she is used to living as a twoleg not a cat. i wonder if her foster parents miss her at all

it was a good think rowanpaw noticed that dark furred intruder and sounded the alarm or thunderclan would have been seized by them

Oh no! They're gone! (I bet Lionpaw was human...and they both became human again...) AAWWEESSOOMMEE!

why was there a twoleg near their territorry

I bet that over time Rowanpaw will get to like having ashfang as a mentor

I can't wait to see if cedarpaw or rowankit is the cat in the prophecy

this is really good! just one question! in the allegiances, it said rowankit was an apprentice! is it supposea to say that? but the story is totally awesome!

The way you write is exactly like Erin, I'm blown away! The story was so thrilling.

The plot itself was a little different than I expected and a little... ok, just not what I expected.

Keep it up and I can't wait to read the further stories )

Poor Thunderkit, Darkkit and Rowankit. they thought that Silverpaw and Cottonpaw forgot about them but they were just excited to be apprenticed.

I really like this story and I hope you keep on writing!

Luv the story! and please keep started on the 5th book!

A nice abrupt ending, huh? I like your story but your ending would be better for the end of a chapter, not a story. Well, I have to go read the sequal now. Bye!

-BF

it sounds really good so far