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| Linay 2008-04-15 ch 1,  | abuseAh.. I love you! This is an awesome piece |
| someonesomewhere 2008-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis has to be one of the most awesome fics on Avatar about Katara that makes her seem grown up and powerful without making her agsty or OOC. I absolutely love it. |
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abusePLEASE continue this!! I LOVE it! The last line and the plot are AWESOME, and I couldn't STAND to see this on hold! PLEASE continue, and good luck, if you do so! This RULES!! Ever-so sincerely signed, Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;) |
| Gert 2007-12-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow this is really amazing! I love how you totally took the characters and story way beyond the kiddy-cutesey-ness of the show. *cough* If that makes sense. :] Our characters are *real* while still staying IC. |
| pyrobabe7713 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseOMG frickin awsome! i totally loved how she used it, and even how katara shied away from killing her even though she deserved it. please continue it... |
| 42nd-Ghoul 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseAn Interesting one-shot you managed to stay true to both characters while not allowing the situation clumsy or childish, Kudos. And I would gladly read a continuation of this story. Later:] |
| Rishtalak 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseHell. Yes. That was just awesome. I love the Katara you've written. So rarely does any author venture into the realm of a waterbender bending the water in a body for the purpose of destroying that body and you've made Katara so *cold* and absolute in her conviction. Well done. |
| Sword On Fire 2007-10-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, goddess. That was *awesome*. Now I hope we see something like this in the actual show! |
| Fire Lord Azula 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was phenomenal. If you decide to continue, I'll gladly read. |
| Myst2 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseI like how you played with the water bending aspect; it reminded me of The Quartered Sea by Tanya Huff, which has a water-singer who uses a very similar method at one point in the book. After all, the human body is mostly water... I also liked how you wrote Katara's breathing and focus. Going to watch some more Avatar shortly. |
| Twilight Rose2 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good, I like when she was asking the Ocean and the Moon to help her. You could so an alternate thing too, like whil Katara is with Azula, Ty Lee could be with Sokka and Sokka could be asking Yue for help. Anyway, indeed if you're not watching Avatar WHAT are you watching Update soon! |
| ktsvillefan 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abusei really enjoyed this chapter...hope u continue with the story. I always wondered about "blood-bending" so its interesting to see here. |
| Burning Touch 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseObviously they're not watching anything if they don't watch Avatar. I really liked your take on Katara bloodbending, especially taking information given to her by Jeong-Jeong and Yogoda. And how she was smart enough to go for the one thing that Azula wouldn't risk compromising, herself and her bending. That was awesome and I hope you delve into Avatar fandom more! |
| graceh 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseI really like this, I would like to see it continued. You portrayed them all very well! The idea of Katara "blood-bending" is quite scary! |