Reviews for Blood Rites II

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DaAmazingMeepers 2008-05-14 ch 7,	abuseWow, this is intense! Keep up the good work! Your spelling needs some work though...
Polly 2008-05-07 ch 7,	abuseHey!! Sorry this took me so long to review - I'm very slow :-( But what a great chapter! The kids are starting to soften my anti-brats heart, I have to admit! Though I'm right there with Raph on the 'no diaper' changing rule. I loved the banter between he and his brothers - it seemed very natural. But the ending was very powerful - I hope Raph doesn't start brooding or going back to his darker ways. Can't wait for the next part :)
maryshine 2008-04-22 ch 7,	abuseAwesome! So I suppose the foot are back, eh? Does that mean we see some more of the Uton Shredder as well? Hey what happened to Chaplin? You should bring him back! I really hope the next chapter deals with Leo and Karai waking up in each other's arms. BTW, you are doing a great job with the characters. . I'm not sure, but I think "Uncle" before a proper noun has to be in cap.
Alora05 2008-04-21 ch 7,	abuseSQUEE An update! OMGosh-ness! runs around in a mad hype Lol. As soon as i saw this in my Inbox, i was like - YAY - and stuff. Wow. Such an awesome update too! We got more of the twins; they are so damn cute! I mean, seriously, even though they're not real, they are awesomely sweet. And Raph just makes me laugh; do anything for those kids except change diapers, lmao. That's exactly what i would be like! Bless his brothers though, they really got the short straw there. And who's the kid? One of the Foot obviously, but wth? Why's he following raph? And he's not under the order of Karai, since shes in Japan with Leo. It's all rather suspicious really... O, im intrigued. lol. NEED to know more, tehe. Hope we get to see more of Karai n Leo in the next chappie too. Totally awesome characterisation... that the right word? I have no idea. Anyways, totally and completely BRILLIANT update. I hope for another soon! lol. Keep well. xx
Evil Wanda 2008-04-20 ch 7,	abuselol, poor Raph get diapers, what happening to Karai & Leo?
LunarLotis 2008-04-20 ch 7,	abuseI thought that clothes were a handle for the babys. :3 Really like your storys
Larissa 2008-04-16 ch 6, anon.	abuseWould you please update this! And please don't make Karai die, that would just kill it. I don't care for Leo and her having slept around when they're not married and the swearing, thank you keeping it light though. But I do like this story, please update and finish it! Take care and God bless.
maryshine 2008-03-02 ch 6,	abuseI have got to say, I LOVE this story! You portray Karai and Leo's relationship perfectly! They seem in love with each other (at least that is where I hope you are going with this) but too much stands in their way and therefore they can't admit it. It is genius. As happy as I am with Leo and Karia, I don't Karai should live. Their love is kind of a tragic love, like Romeo and Juliet. Just please let Leo and Karai declare their love for one another before that happens. Keep up the good work! I look forward to chapter seven!
Evil Wanda 2008-02-26 ch 6,	abusego on. i want to know whap happing to karai
Polly 2007-12-13 ch 6,	abuseAnother fab chapter! I'm so glad to see this story updated. I don't know the characters that well but I like the way you portray Leo and Karai - it never seems to get too mushy and you're always left wishing that things would go a little more smoothly, even though you've made it clear that things would never properly work out between them. I loved Leo's compelling argument and Karai's utter confusion over why he cared. Anyway, I hope they can find a way out of this. Poor girl - she never can catch a break, can she?
Skills 2007-12-10 ch 6, anon.	abuseHey, thanks for updating this story. I have missed it xD As for your question, yeah, their relationship is very believable. I really like it, in fact :) Please, update again soon! - Skills :P
Alora05 2007-12-10 ch 6,	abuseAw factor much! Totally and completely brilliant ^.^ I like the relationship you've built up between the two. It's believable, and if you consider the past between them, makes sense. They've always been destined to be, and i challenge anyone to tell me that's not so (damn Ninja tribunal season >.> That last little bit with karai almost killed me). The beginning description was brilliant- i could actually see Tokyo in my minds eye. I love your descriptions ^.^ Do we get to see more of the twins? A slight bit of info with this chapter, still not as much as i'd like, but i guess you can't just finish the whole story in one chapter, lol sheepish laugh. Don't like the Doctor fellow- he seems creepy. And totally empathise with the workload stuff. It really sucks. But like you said, can't last forever (cross fingers!) I shall be waiting patiently in the wings for the next act! (And i do the daydreaming thing a lot in class. I really shouldn't, but when your chemistry teacher has the voice of a monotoned sloth on a hot day, kinda can't help it, lol) May the force watch over you young padawan (have no idea whats with the star wars reference...) xx
Floragirl101 2007-11-15 ch 5, anon.	abuseGood story. It's really interesting. Can't wait to read more!
Skills 2007-11-15 ch 5, anon.	abuseOh, I love this story! I really like the Leo/Karai thing! ^^ And now he is going to save her, will he succed? Please update soon, so I (and I'm sure other as well) can now! - Skills :D
Blackangle2011 2007-11-07 ch 5,	abusegreat chapter.

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