Touching. x-tremely touchiing. Like da way ya use slow romance then *bam* fast again. Keep it up! And Rock on!

That's Appex's origin? Why, I never thought of that.

You know, maybe Appex could be in All Stars.

So, Appex saved Zena when they were kids, did he? No wonder she is so interested in him. Plus, she got Appex to open up to her, it IS a big accomplishment in her books. Wonder what they're kids will look like.

It started off funny. Sounds like a run-on. Was this originally in a story?

Other than that, pretty good.

But you always use one phrase- in every story: "I'll never stop loving/caring for you."

Just thought I'd point it out.

Get on yahoo more often.

aww i loved it!

Kawaii to da maxx! LUVED IT!

Wow! That was really cool! Wow! Never knew that would happen!

Keep up the good work!

Love Bloodrayne6

That was really good!

Cant wait for the next story!

Been a while since you put up a new fic. Neat! _ Was this a oneshot?