Aw.. poor Stephen! That's definitely a hard read for someone with such a massive science bent. *cackles* Oh well.. the first was always the hardest to get into.. I can totally see him getting addicted once he gets going lol

Okay. I've recently been inducted into the Medical Investigation lover's club, admittedly a little late, but hey, better late than never. And your are some of the best introspections, character analysis and general Stephen/Natalie connection sotries that I've seen here at the Pit. Bravo!

You have a true talant for alliterations and word play, and your descriptions are seemless and spot on. You keep them in wonderful character, through all of your scenarios. And you manage to keep the UST between the two going, enough to satiate my hunger for romantic tension. I'm currently enthralled by your "Signature Required" fic that I just found. For a show now defunct, you do the characters justice. Great job!

And I must say that for not reading or watching any Harry Potter you have done pretty well.

Actually, extremely well.

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I liked the interaction between the two.

'Settling back into his chair, Stephen refused himself the treat of watching her walk away.They’d had a decent talk, the first in as many months as there were books in this series. Maybe J.K. Whoever was useful after all.'

Bravo!