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dutchtreat
2007-12-03 . chapter 7
Stuffy, I just read your final two chapters (sorry, hadn't been on ff-net for ages) and I loved it...usually I don't like to picture D/L as grandparents, but because this story was centered around Brinn I actually liked it a lot...

The way you introduced Brandon was done perfectly in line with the whole story and the big steps through Brinn's life...

I was sorry to read about Mac and Sid, but it was realistic...

D/L lives on forever through Brinn and Aurora...*big bundle of daisies for you*
audaciousblonde
2007-11-15 . chapter 7
"His wife and daughter had blessed him with more love and happiness than he could ever possibly imagine."

Aw...what a sweet tale of family and life. Beautiful little journey. I love it.

Well Done. :D
Marian MacKenzie
2007-11-15 . chapter 7
I love it! I like the way you closed the story with basiclly the same scene. very cool. keep up the good work!! :)
soswimmer13
2007-11-15 . chapter 7
Aurora is the name of the princess in Sleeping Beauty.

love the story!!
gwen24
2007-11-15 . chapter 7
i loved it! really good job! ;)
TatianaMik
2007-11-14 . chapter 7
Aw. That was so cute.
nattybatty55
2007-11-11 . chapter 6
Nope I think you introduced him perfectly :D

I really beautiful chapter.
Mariekjj
2007-11-11 . chapter 6
What a lovely chapter! The wedding was wonderful. I immediately liked Brandon! You didn't introduce him too fast, I like that you jumped forward quite a lot years. And the last sentence got me thinking: are they going to have a baby?

I'm looking forward to your next update :)
TatianaMik
2007-11-10 . chapter 6
This seems like snapshots of Brinn's life so no I don't think you were too quick to introduce Brandon. So in the next one are Danny & Lindsey going to become grandparents?
PintSizeGenius
2007-11-06 . chapter 5
Aww! I'm so glad Brinn's okay! Awesome chapter, Stuffy! So cute! Love that you included Aiden too, nice. Post more soon, pwease? lol! PSG x
dutchtreat
2007-11-06 . chapter 5
Very sweet chapter dear! I know how hard it is to just sit and wait whilst you can do nothing for someone you love; I was so sad for Danny and Lindsay...loved the guardian Angel!

*BIG HUG* you sounded like you could use one...
TatianaMik
2007-11-05 . chapter 5
I love that Aiden is her guardian angel. :D
Murgy31
2007-11-05 . chapter 4
AWESOME CHAPTER!
PintSizeGenius
2007-11-05 . chapter 4
Evil, evil, evil Stuffy! Loved it! I hope Brinn's okay! She better be! lol! Post soon! PSG x
dutchtreat
2007-11-04 . chapter 4
Oh, total fluffy story that suddenly turns angsty. I love you evil side Stuffy. And Brinn's one tough chick going to crime scenes and such, so I'm convinced that she'll be fine.
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