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| Toni America 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseBRAVO! I adored it! I've always had mixed feelings about Jean. Sometimes I like her, and sometimes I really (eye begins to twitch) really don't. Great story! Keep it up! |
| aimeeish 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseIt didn’t mention that he jogged for two miles every morning and invited Emma along. It didn’t mention the way he, as they ran through the park, would pull her off the trail and kiss her, wait for her to begin undressing him before he ravished her against the morning dew. Oh, I loved those lines so much. This is a very good fan fiction. I enjoyed it very much. It's definitely interesting to see how Emma would react had Scott died instead of Jean. |
| kiragecko 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseCold and hopeless and yet still beautiful. Good understanding of Emma. kiragecko |