The whole concept is somewhat crazy. Honestly, vanishing for 12 years and after such long time realising his place is with the woman he left behind is a bit of an overstretch. But still an interesting and well thought out story with some minor flaws :p
You haven't updated for half a year I hope you haven't dropped it yet, so many unfinished stories out there :/

man...this is some sad **...but it can be fix'd!!...just kick that oc's ** to the curb and have fayt fall on his knees and beg her with everything he has for her to take him back so they can work thourgh this..

WOW!
SISTA
this story is awesome
whoo hoo taylor got her mojo back
:']

Um, kinda bad. First of all, you didn't really set the scene. I didn't know this was however many years later until it was stated that Maria disappeared and Nel had a daughter. And, uh, I really feel that the characters simply are not in character. I cannot believe that Fayt and Nel would conceive a child, especially since he is love with Maria? And if Nel is so good at holding back her feelings, why would she snap at Fayt, especially in front of their daughter?

I also have issues with grammatical errors. I see in your fic many awkward sentences and a great lack of commas.

woo, when i saw the chapter title, i feared the worst. Glad you aren't giving up on this story.

o its juicy!!Q!!
AHH JAMES IS IN IT!! lol jkjkjk

post more soon :D
Jessica~

o so good
update soon missy!
~Jessica

o, it kept its juicyness!
lol still good!
update soon!

~Jessica

o. it's juicy!
lol good but sad. update soon

~Jessica