I smelled it! LOL.You portrayed their characters really well too.:D I give it a 4.5/5.

Wow this is really really well written, I'd love to see more E&E work written by you
~Mick, AKA Hollywood Grimm

this story is amazing. you wrote it so well; it's probably the best e&e fic on the site.

you know there's a section for this story, right? in cartoons.

“And I always thought you secretly had a crush on that purple clad slut.”...lol...Edgar...a crush on Stephanie?? no way..

By the way, good fic. The twins wont make pranks forever, wont they?

Wow, I absolutely love your writing style. It's not overly descriptive (because that usually bugs me) but just descriptive enough so that you're hungry for more.

Although I'm generally against incest, I really liked the subtleness of your fic. I'm writing an E&E fic right now so hopefully I'll put it up soon.

Thanks for the story!

I'm impressed. You have the rare combination of intelligence and an open mind - a lot of people don't have either. Thanks. I feel a little better about the world.

I think it's sad that there's only one Edgar and Ellen fic out there, don't you? I'm not disappointed that it's this fic, though. =D

First off, I love your style of writing. It is so descriptive and entertaining. And I love the vocabulary you used. I think this is the first story to ever make me have to look up a word (or three), and I think I'll be using it a lot more frequently now that I've heard it. Debonair...

They were so in-character this could have been in the show/books. The dialogue was real and natural, not some crazy thing with a lack of contractions. (Because in all honesty, who talks like that?) ^-^

One thing I noticed, however, was that a few times there were tense changes, going from past to present for a millisecond, and then back again. XD It was fine, but I just thought you might want to know.

Everything was quite realistic when I look at it, from the way you describe the twins to the fact that it's Ellen who stayed at school. I liked the real-feel to it. ;)

No, I'm not going to ask you to make it longer, because, unlike some reviewers on this site, I know when a story has to end or doesn't need a sequel. I do want to ask you to write another Edgar and Ellen fanfic, though. This one is of top-notch quality and I enjoyed it tremendously.

There needs to be more of these Edgar and Ellen fanfics. Yours was really good. Do you know where there are other GOOD ones, besides on this site? Thanks for writing this!

YEA! best show EVER! continue writing!

Aw! I love this so much! There is hardly any fanfiction for these two.

Fantastic! I've read alot of fanfiction, and my recent obsession with the series has led me to seek out what little quality fanfiction is out there for them. However, this one tops it all. Beautifully done, perfectly in character and it has a sprinkling of a pairing I can't get enough of. Excelent job.

I really love this fic. It's really tough to find Edgar/Ellen, even if it is just hints. Do you know where more good ones are? Or if you don't, you wouldn't mind taking a request, Will you? Ok well I really liked this story, un. Erm Bye, Nya.