Reviews for When You're Not Looking

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EvaFlack001 2008-07-25 ch 73,	abuseBrilliant! I was laughing all the way through "THE TALK" it was fantastic! I'm falling in love with Tony he sounds like a great kid. And as for Katie, she's hilarious. You write like a mom. That's a compliment btw, you get inside the kids heads and I can see them in mine. I don't know how else to say it. I really love the way you write i can see it onscreen in front of me it's really great.
ImaSupernaturalCSI 2008-07-24 ch 73,	abuseThat. Was. Priceless! And I love how Tony's all "Yeah, we read about this in health class." And ribbing Flack on being old. Too good. Can't wait for more.
Madison Bellows 2008-07-24 ch 73,	abuseStill here, still enjoying, just with very unreliable (and stolen) internet currently!
Forest Angel 2008-07-23 ch 73,	abuseLoved it! Daughter of the FDNY Commisioner, great way to make it more uncomfortable!
katydid13 2008-07-23 ch 73,	abuse“What? You mean today?” Don asked as if she had just requested that he broker a deal to bring about peace in the Middle East before he came home for supper. -- I loved that line. It was perfect. I also really enjoyed Don talking about love. I'm not sure that the Don Flack at the beginning of this story would have said those same things. It shows wonderful character growth.
hope4sall 2008-07-23 ch 73,	abuseThat "talk" was good. I liked how Flack kept thinking about his own recollections of the same talk... Great job!
mabelreid 2008-07-23 ch 73,	abuseThat was funny... I needed a good laugh tonight so thanks. I don't know who I felt worse for Tony or Flack. We’ll see, Donnie. This girl Tony likes? Yeah, her last name is Ramirez. As in Franklin Ramirez. She’s the daughter of the FDNY’s Fire Commissioner.” “Whoa, whoa, whoa. Fire Commissioner? No way. My stepson ain’t datin’ anyone connected to FDNY’s pain in the ** commish. No way in hell.” Noelle tried to keep the amusement she was feeling out of her voice. She knew that there was a long-standing, playful rivalry between the NYPD and FDNY. However, she had heard both her husband and father-in-law actually complain about the commissioner on more than one occasion over various things. “I’m afraid you might not have much of a choice there, baby.” Poor Flack... I don't think that locking Tony up till he's thrity five is going to work, but it's a nice thought. LOL Now... how is he going to react when it's Katie's turn?
Leena7 2008-07-22 ch 72,	abuseIt just occurred to me, why didn't Tony's Nana let the authorities know that their was no one to look after Tony? Who is Sophia? Does his interest in her mean Don needs to hurry up on that talk?
ImaSupernaturalCSI 2008-07-20 ch 72,	abuseWell, then next chapter oughta be VERY interesting...and I am very much looking forward to it. Dontcha love it when you can make up things to make laws, adoptions and cases fo your own way? :)
Forest Angel 2008-07-19 ch 72,	abuseGood for Tony that his grandmother agreed to the custody arrangement and he has a new home. Katie is the type of kid who can cheer anyone up. Sophia coming to stay? ... I think Flack will need to have that talk!
hope4sall 2008-07-19 ch 72,	abuseI like the idea of fluffiness coming up, but this was a very nice chapter. Good scenes of Don being a dad to a teenage boy. Not an easy adjustment, I'm sure! Great job.
katydid13 2008-07-19 ch 72,	abuseExcellent chapter! I love Katie and Tony together. Don is probably going to have to talk to Tony about sex. That could be amusing.
mabelreid 2008-07-19 ch 72,	abusePoor Tony... I'm very glad that he has Noelle and Don. He seems to be a good kid that's just having alot of bad things happen to him. I love his little scene with Katie. She is so cute! They make great siblings. Poor Flack, dealing with a fourteen year old boy. I like that o Danny made it clear the sex talk was up to Don... Although it would have been funny to see Messer fumble his way through that! Thanks for more Flack family togetherness. I hope this story goes on forever!
ImaSupernaturalCSI 2008-07-18 ch 71,	abuseI will pay good money to read about Flack giving Tony the Birds and Bees speech! I wondered if adopting Tony wouldn't be where this might be going...I am very much looking forward to more!
Leena7 2008-07-16 ch 71,	abuseI totally saw it coming in respect to them keeping Tony. I doubt i'm the only one. Thats ok because, at heart, your a fluffy bunny writer.

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