 Isabel M-Ameban 2007-10-29 . chapter 1Hahahhahaha! That was good. L visiting his alumns on Halloween. The interaction between characters is very nice, too. I'd like L's menssage to Mello would be a little more developed, though.
I like Hall... Perhaps you know it, but acording with her Japanese canon, she's afraid of moths; not sure about other insects type. However, it's funny to see Giovanni disguised as a gigantic bug. XD
The end is quite abrupt, but I liked the idea of Mello being scared of goshts and asking Hal for her company... as Matt just still playing. XD |