PLEASE WRITE MORE!

Love it so much!
Made me laugh so much about her hitting kakashi and the praying mantis bit!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks for writing! x x

Excellent!

Your back, YEAH! I loved this chapter. Kakashi is way way to funny. I so could see him doing all those things, way to go.

I got a feeling there is more to this mission... am i right? ^_^ I guess i'll have to wait and se

awsome story so far! Kakashi's reaction to Sakura's comment made me laugh ^.^ can't wait to see what happens next!

As promised, here is some good old-fashioned concrit. Unfortunately, my reviewing buddy is absent right now.

Your prose style is very good. It's lyrical, and I quite like the cadence. Your characterizations are interesting. It's always nice to read fics in which the author plays with a character's dimensions, instead of focusing on a single facet. I do recommend that you keep the pace you have right now, not too slow, not too fast. Although this is romance and passion is sort of a no duh, it would be utterly appalling to have it become something along the lines of PWP.

So far, I can't say much, seeing as you've just written the first chapter. :] But keep it up.

This is awesome! I'm enjoying this so much already! I LOVE the banter between KakaSaku...They're basically a bickering old married couple! Love it! Looking forward to the coming chapters! =D

You didn't need to credit me! Thank you so much, it means alot that was really nice of you!

I thought this was an excellent chapter, i loved the dynamic that you gave Sakura and Kakashi, the characterization is dead-on and believable (golf claps). I could totally seeing them growing closer through the years in Sasuke's absence becuase Naruto had been training with Jiraiya for years basically leaving them alone, it would only be natural for two people to grow together without influence of other cell members. It will be interesting to see them operate as civillians, i'm sure some antics will ensue.

Great chapter! Sorry for the lengthy review, but i though this was awesome and wouldn't change a thing. It's very cohesive and stylized differently than the prologue but appealing none the less.

Great chapter, looking forward to the next review!

I loved the imagery in this prologue, it was well written and insightful, I can't wait for you to update. I just don't understand one thing, if it's raining out, how is blood drying on her skin? wouldn't it be smearing or rinsing off?

Update soon! we're looking forward to it!