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Reviews for: Heartbeat, Rise and Fall
teenelizabeth
2008-05-05 . chapter 3
Aww, I loved this short series! The line about choking on oatmeal made me laugh. ^_^

-Christine
Rotten
2008-04-13 . chapter 3
Woah!

*squeels*

:D
please, do continue!!
its getting realy good so far!

;D
-Rotten-
dins
2007-11-15 . chapter 1
Haha, that was great, I completely love hugging Robin x Amon ^^

I like it how you write Amon, showing how he's the kind of guy that can't admit to his own feelings, which is why the 'unconsciously pulling Robin closer to him' is my favourite part of it.

From Yours Truly
Roswalyn
2007-11-02 . chapter 3
I absolutely LOVED all of this!! Amon pulling Robin closer and letting her sleep against him, Robin waking up to find herself sleeping on Amon's chest (now THAT'S the way to wake up!), and the "morning after" awkwardness. I have to admit, the naughty part of my mind cracked up at this line from Amon: "I would rather avoid being forced to resuscitate you after you’ve choked on oatmeal." Hmm, now something tells me Amon wouldn't mind performing mouth-to-mouth on Robin quite so much...

The ending of this was absolutely perfect, with Amon remembering Robin's hair tickling his chin and smiling about it -- what a great image to be left with!
Gotta Dance 88
2007-10-28 . chapter 3
Very sweet. Nicely written too!
Doc Squeaky
2007-10-28 . chapter 3
I like the second chapter, nicely written. You got across a sense of longing well. Hey look, you do still have a computer, what a surprise. Guess you forgot your password to yahoo. Anyway nice story, keep writing. Written any originals lately?

Katie
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