 teenelizabeth 2008-05-05 . chapter 3Aww, I loved this short series! The line about choking on oatmeal made me laugh. ^_^
-Christine |
 Rotten 2008-04-13 . chapter 3 Woah!
*squeels*
:D
please, do continue!!
its getting realy good so far!
;D
-Rotten- |
 dins 2007-11-15 . chapter 1Haha, that was great, I completely love hugging Robin x Amon ^^
I like it how you write Amon, showing how he's the kind of guy that can't admit to his own feelings, which is why the 'unconsciously pulling Robin closer to him' is my favourite part of it.
From Yours Truly |
 Roswalyn 2007-11-02 . chapter 3I absolutely LOVED all of this!! Amon pulling Robin closer and letting her sleep against him, Robin waking up to find herself sleeping on Amon's chest (now THAT'S the way to wake up!), and the "morning after" awkwardness. I have to admit, the naughty part of my mind cracked up at this line from Amon: "I would rather avoid being forced to resuscitate you after you’ve choked on oatmeal." Hmm, now something tells me Amon wouldn't mind performing mouth-to-mouth on Robin quite so much...
The ending of this was absolutely perfect, with Amon remembering Robin's hair tickling his chin and smiling about it -- what a great image to be left with! |
 Gotta Dance 88 2007-10-28 . chapter 3Very sweet. Nicely written too! |
 Doc Squeaky 2007-10-28 . chapter 3 I like the second chapter, nicely written. You got across a sense of longing well. Hey look, you do still have a computer, what a surprise. Guess you forgot your password to yahoo. Anyway nice story, keep writing. Written any originals lately?
Katie |
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