This is one of my favorites of your "Witch Hunter Robin" stories...very tragically written. Makes you think. After all, I did always ponder the possiblities of Amon's craft.

This is so sad...The fact that it was a dream came as quite a shock! I like that you threw in that they did leave Japan. The descriptions were excellent. Though I wonder...did she desert him or did she die?

That's sweet and sad, poor Amon...

This was perfectly suspenseful and perfectly tragic. Wonderful piece.

-Christine

I also love how the middle does not ruin the end and how you dont find out that it is a dream until the last moment.

How like Amon, to be so calculating even in his dreams. That's probably what made Robin leave him, I'd wager. Good piece, very good.

great cant wait for the rest

aw. kinda sad, but very well written. thanks for your contribution. bai bai

Wow. I know you meant to leave us in suspense as to what actually happened to Robin, but inquiring minds want to know -- what happened to Robin?? Is she dead, hence the cold? I hope not -- you know how I feel about character death! Still, this was a beautiful piece, so in-character for the two of them, with Amon caring about her despite himself, despite his sarcastic comments to the contrary. I just love your drabbles and one-shots, and I can't wait for more!

thatw as so so nice...

interesting! I had no idea it was a dream until the very end! good job...