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Reviews For: Roses And Thorns

Awesome Rapidash
2008-02-18
ch 5,
abuseThis was good. The chapter felt a bit slow, but it was probably nessesary to set things up for the next chapter. I felt sorry for Gray though, to be rejected, ouch that hurts! Then to add insult to injury (literally) having to have his stiches removed the way they were. double ouch! Cliff is so nosey, I mean it seemed pretty clear that Gray didn't want to talk about what happened, yet he insisted that Gray give him all the details.

I'm looking forward to seeing what will happen when Gray sees Ann at the Inn, could be explosive. Till next time, cya!
The Scarlet Sky
2008-02-16
ch 5,
abuseAHAHAHAHA!

Sorry. But THAT, my friend, was genius. Jealous!Doctor, Apologetic!Elli, fanfic genius. I also love the scheming duo of Ann and Cliff. XD

Ah, what will become of poor heartbroken Gray now?

...Oh, no. Not online dating--Ann, get away from the Internet! --dashes off to protect Gray--
Midnight Philosophy
2008-01-19
ch 4,
abuseGreat story. I can't wait to see where this is going. You better write the next chapter soon!

I hope Gray and Mary end up together in the end. I'm a sucker for Grary.
Awesome Rapidash
2008-01-03
ch 4,
abuseOh, not a cliffhanger! Hmm..., I wonder what Ann and Cliff have in mind for Gray? Somehow I don't think it will be to his liking. But then... maybe it will. I really like the way this story is coming together, its got me totally hooked! I'm definatly going to be looking out for the next chapter, I wanna know what they are plotting! Cya then.
kelley28
2007-12-05
ch 3,
abusePoor Gray! Will he get to fall for someone else? Or become friends with Jack?
Awesome Rapidash
2007-12-02
ch 3,
abuseWow, I really felt sorry for Gray after reading this chapter. I mean to have to face Jack must have been very difficult. Add to that the fact that he has to listen to Mary tell him about her pregnancy. I admire his restraint, as a guy I can sorta relate to how he feels when the girl you love seems oblivious to it. Please update soon, I wanna know what will happen next! Till then, cya!
Flaming Black Skull
2007-12-01
ch 3,
abuseI liked this chapter. It was really nice. There were two parts I liked more than the rest though. Like-

//After all, the desire to rip someone apart and kick them into the next decade was hardly a virtue of friendship. //

And-

//As he observed the ominous dark clouds hanging above, he smirked in grim satisfaction. Now it really was raining. //
The Scarlet Sky
2007-12-01
ch 3,
abuseGray was so in-character...man, I really feel for the guy. Loved the "rip-him-apart" line. XD

But I wonder, how will the story end? Will Gray let go and move on?

Or will he learn to make amends with Mary and Jack?

Or possibly...

Find love again?
Awesome Rapidash
2007-10-30
ch 2,
abusePoor Gray, I guess if it wasn't for bad luck he'd have no luck at all! This is really shaping up to be an interesting story. I like to read stories that focus on the prespectives of the rivals. How will Gray Handle the fact that Mary is pregnant? And he has to face Jack when Mary tells him the good news. Next chapter please!
Flaming Black Skull
2007-10-28
ch 2,
abuseGreat. Just great for the luck of Grey. Another thing to tie him down on, then again another thing for him to be able to let go of his feelings. I have a feeling that a certain female farmer might come along and help him out soon... Hee!

Cha!
The Scarlet Sky
2007-10-28
ch 2,
abuseDude.

I like to write depressing Graire, but depressing Jary? This is new.

I like it.

Wonder how Gray will handle this...and what Jack's like...and whether Mary really loves him. Continue, please.
Jean Cooper
2007-10-28
ch 2, anon.
abuseOMG! Poor Gray...sniff...I am hoping things get better for him somehow. It is- as everything you do- wonderfully written. Good job and good luck.
1angelette
2007-10-28
ch 2,
abuse...
Make Gray the father and we will lurve you.
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