Awesome story, good luck wit kingdom hearts! And THANKS! THANKS! THANKS! FOR NOT KILLING SODA!

the thing that tells your heartbeat is an iv machine. That being said i wont judge you for killing him!

He cant die! you cant do that to me! Dont kill him please! I love the story! I'll be happy with this story as long as Soda is living.

i love Kingdom hearts i beat all of the games it was easy except for beating the gray haired peron.I think his name was ansem. I lost the game because of a bet. I nver bet again! Your story is awesome just dont kill Soda.

Please dont kill him! Pony will never fogive himself!

dont make him die!

aw.. that's so sad. I hope they see each otyher again.. please don't die soda!...and steve too!lol!

i hope she doesn't hurt him

oh cant wait to see what happens next

i thought trixie liked ponyboy.lol i guees one guy cant satisfy her. good story

i think yiou portray the character of ponyboy perfectly

cant wait to read the next one i hope i can review on each chapter

awesome i hope ponyboy doesn't runaway again

it was good

I just totally imagined Darry saying "Little fight, my foot!"

It sounds like something my grandma would say, and she does say it. Love the story so far.