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| Manyara 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseGosh dangit I hate when that happens. Espesiously when in crossovers Danny just reveals his secret. |
| Devianta 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseFirst off: Thank you! I couldn't agree with you more. Second: This was funny. I love the "I'm gonna go tell my parents my secret now!" part. That always seems to happen in stories. And out of the clear blue too. Third: You had a few errors here and there (incorrect punctuation, capitalization, etc.), . I don't know if you made the mistakes on purpose to go with the bad plot line and stuff or if they're actual mistakes. But it doesn't really matter in the end. This was still good. Again, thanks for writing this! |
| Phantomfangirl 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseYou're completly right. I'm glad that you're giving the new authors these tips. |