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| saragillie 2008-04-08 ch 20,  | abuseInteresting story. I felt that the characters were a bit out of character in the beginning, and your grammar certainly needed help. Both of these improved toward the end. Keep practicing and you'll continue to get better. :-) |
| Cork 2008-02-27 ch 20, | abuseHay loved the story it was brill keept me going till the end cool |
| iamwriter 2008-02-17 ch 19, | abuseI am a sucker for Happy endings! Great story. |
| mereva 2008-02-08 ch 17, | abuseOh no, not Sully again... They were doing *so good* without him! |
| bb-4ever 2008-02-08 ch 17, | abusegood chapter. glad they're both ok. I think booth's misunderstood bones - is she happy because booth's alive? or that she's going to see sully soon? will she like his surprise? look forward to more soon |
| GorgeousGummyBear 2008-02-01 ch 16, | abuseAH! more more more! |
| bb-4ever 2008-01-31 ch 16, | abusegreat chapter. oh my god! his rescuer just got shot! will he and bones make it out alive? look forward to more soon |
| bb-4ever 2008-01-27 ch 15, | abusegood chapter. of course bones would find him they save each other. look forward to more soon |
| GorgeousGummyBear 2008-01-23 ch 14, | abusei'll be waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter! this one was great!! |
| bb-4ever 2008-01-18 ch 13, | abusewow! two great chapters. love bones reaction to Ashley in chapter 12. and ohg! spooky chapter 13. will booth make it out alive? look forward to more soon |
| GorgeousGummyBear 2008-01-17 ch 13, | abuseMORE ! suspense is eating me alive...grah |
| GorgeousGummyBear 2008-01-17 ch 12, | abuseupdate! argh suspense! |
| bb-4ever 2007-12-31 ch 11, | abusegood chapter. good that bones and booth had a quick chat. will bones be able to find booth before he's tortured to much? look forward to more soon - happy new years |
| bb-4ever 2007-12-27 ch 10, | abusegood chapter. the plot thickens. will those two finally talk? will they find the killers? look forward to more soon |
| bb-4ever 2007-12-13 ch 9, | abusegood chapter. bones is getting much better with people she did quiet well at that interview. will booth ever pick up his phone - i know he's hurting but she needs him as much as he needs her really. hope she doesn't go! look forward to more soon |