Cool. More please.

This is excellent! An interesting/original theme that happens to be about my favorite pair-up. Very well written, I love the cliff hanger at the end of chapter 2. I'm looking forward to reading more!

aw [ everyone is dead [ but i still like it, amazingly! lol good job

Good job!

Emilye

It's definitely not that weird anymore, but still I don't know, if I like it or not. It sure has something, it just seems at the moment, as if I just can't grasp it. If this sounds really weird: I haven't slept for 27 hours xD

I'll sure stick around and read the next chapters, maybe than I'll be able to say something more... It sure still sounds interesting.

Good job and poor Willow!

Emilye

Can't wait to read more. This story seems interesting so far.

Oh, this is interesting! Where do you get all these wonderful and unique ideas? Sheesh, your fricking muse is working overtime. I look forward to more :)

At the moment I don't really know, what to think about it. It seems kinda weird to me...but mabye it's really just me. Maybe that'll change, with the next chapter or so...but at the moment I still like Retrograde more ;)

But it's good to see something new from you, just makes the beginning of my holidays even better -

Oh...I love this beginning. What did the Immortal do to her?