i feel the need 2 review again. btw, u need 2 check ur e-mail more often. i think that this story is better as a 1shot, unlike everyone else, because nothing will b as interesting as this or u will change the origional story 2 much.

It was okay. It's not a bad idea. You should really expand it because I'm confused with the story. What do you mean an age old curse? How is this a love story? Does the doctor love her? Overall, it was an okay story with many plot holes. If you rewrite it, then I'm sure it would be a heck of a story. Rock on!

Wow. I definitely didn't expect such a short story to capture the original so well. Good job.

interesting.

You're right, it does take less than a minute. *laugh*

Good little summarization in modern times of Sleeping Beauty. I like that it was only ten years too, it adds to the realistic quality; yet the flowers and rose, and Philip keep the fairy tale-esque side delightfully intact. Splendidly done!

I thought that was a beautiful, tragic story. When I read the first few sentences, though, I was in shock. I think you should dig into the core of the story in about the second paragraph. I felt taken aback at the familitary that seeped into my mind as I read about the family mourning the loss of their beloved daughter. Recently, a neighbor of mine has died, so I realize the fear and hopelessness that must have taken over the family. It was very descriptive, as well.